Reviews for I'm So Numb
Kressida chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
i loved it alex, it really stuck in my heart.. i think it's coz i know only too well how you feel coz i feel this way right now.. you really have a way with wirds, and they flow really good. luv ya!
love Zai
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Brilliantly written, well done, you've got a great flow to your writing. I remember doing my best writing devoid of emotion too, kinda funny eh? how despair breeds inspiration.
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Bravoness. It didn't flow like your others did but it was still full fo expression and emotion. Great job yet again!
Hitsumei chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Another perspective that I have read before, but you've written it wonderfully here. The rhyme scheme only gets better with each poem, and I think you're really getting the hang of meter. It has a flowing feel to it, like you don't have to work for it. _ A unique meter, but you've created your own style, and it's quite good. Keep up the good work.
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
wow good poem!