Reviews for My Security
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
I know how you feel, and what you mean. It makes a lot of sense! The poem expressed the emotion and feeling really well too. Brilliance
Kressida chapter 1 . 11/5/2004
great work and so true, alex. loved it! i really did.. you are and amazing poet! love you!
luv Zai
Hitsumei chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Wow, you just keep them coming, don't you? _ I could feel the dependency in this poem, it's illustrated beautifully. This poem didn't flow as well as some of your others, but your other poems have raised the bar quite high, so that doesn't make this a bad poem in the least. _ Keep up the good work.
Aya
ElatedHatred chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
He he, I like this.. It reminds me of my childhood.