Reviews for A Pale Shimmer At The Side Of A Boy In Black
Grim Goodbye chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
I really wish you would write more...why wasn't more added on?

Great job!
leaky pen chapter 1 . 10/3/2007
I love the story. How come another chapter was never added on?
Daisy Rose chapter 1 . 3/29/2006
Beautiful. I was absolutely drawn in. The imagery was inspiring.
kit feral chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
I must say, I completely LOVE the title for this. It's wicked cool. And Andrew- CUTE! Lol, I have such a thing for green eyed boys wearing eyeliner. (You might want to add a little something that explains the change of view point- I got confused for a moment and thought it was all Lily and I wondered if she was a cross-dresser, lol!) Anyway, I absolutely LOVE this story. (Like all of them, really, lol.) I LOVED the last two lines. SO beautiful. I LOVE Andrew. And Lily's cool, too. Anyway, I REALLY think you should continue this. It's amazing. Please write more soon! :D
kamma7292 chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Great start! Are you ever gonna update it?
Love Kills Slowly chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
Hey, this is really good! I love the descriptions of Lily and Andy, and I really like where the story is going. You should really continue this! It may not be The Emo Boy Stories, but it's good! Update soon!
NotSoPunk chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
Wow, very cool. Write more if you feel inspired.
Stormy Daye chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
Good so far. I like the title, it's cute.
A Perfect Sonnet chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Are you going to write more? You should write more. You -are- going to write more, right?
Pretty Please?
NirvanaChicas chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
it wasn't the sequal to emo boys, still crying, but it was very very good!
i loved it!
i cant wait to read more... i have to tell u i read a lot ... and i mean A LOT of stuff people write on fictionpress. but ur work is my favorite by far
Alison
D L Dzioba chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
Wow, Not really my kind of story usually but this is great. I love the Description of Andy and Lily. Very nice, please post some more of it soon.