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   pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/26/2005 Good. Effecting and kind of creepy. |
| Ahemait chapter 1 . 12/13/2004 GODDAMN YOU AND FRICKEN AWESOME POEMS!'tis all i have to say... |
| Zombie Zak chapter 1 . 12/1/2004 Oh hott! |
| graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 11/14/2004 wow...this was just awesome, addin it to my favs. goes so deep...flows so well...love the imagery! |
| Moon860 chapter 1 . 11/3/2004 I LOVE IT! WELL FREAKIN' DONE! KEEP IT UP, WRITE MORE! ::ehem::, before that brief outburst, i would like to introduce myself, i am Moon860 or "her" as i am called by the majority of the school, nice poem, i liked it, love the hounding you silently part, it reminds me of a book i read, about a silent figure that murdered girls for no apparent reason, he had the same flow of thought as this poem, you didn't know who he was, or what he wanted, until the end. You have a good frame of mind for poems, you have the ability to change real life emotions into poems. I envy you for that quality, as i am, how shall i say this? rubbish at making half-decent poems. well done, Moon860 |
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 10/20/2004 beautiful poem! |
| Myriah chapter 1 . 10/19/2004 I love this poem, it's written so well, the rythm is great and the emotion is there. Good one. |
| vampires immortal kiss chapter 1 . 10/18/2004 great hate poem i liked it alot... ~reveiw mine if you like~~ |