great story. keep up the good work.

Whaoh... Romance-writing on the verge of some climax there! Good job! You've got me clinging to my mouse there... Whoo... So much for romance, this should be half romance-half suspense. Can't truly wait anymore... Update ASAP! As in, ASAP! Can't get enough of this! Good work!

Due to my oh-so stubborness, I would like to offer an apology for my long time no review, but so far, after that great break, I read this chapter and honestly thought that you do have some cards up under your sleeves... All I can think about now is: Who took those damn pictures? That person's a meanie! Hehe:) Anyway, nice one! P.S. Hey, you don't reply to my e-mails anymore, huhuhu :( just jokin :) Hope to hear from you soon!

omg, u HAVE to update soon... this is a really original idea for a story and i just love it. although you should make your chapters longer, anyways, hope you update often.

Hey that's cruelty to stop there ! Come on ! Write more !

Wait a minute, this story (few chapter back) is different, I think. Well anyway, I like this. It's - well - it's great.

Finn is the adult here, he should have been so much more careful...like not go out with her so publicily...anyways, good stuff...cannot wait for more!I wonder if they will stick to it ?

AUGH! *wrings hands in exasperation* PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!

IT WAS LEE! I KNOW IT'S HER! WHY, THAT CONNIVING B%&*! Maybe not ... i'm getting out of hand here. I apologise. BUT WHO? HOW? WHY?

THAT BIATCH! god, how sneaky! I usually like the bewst friends personalities/characters in stories, but I'm sorry - i don't like Lee very much :( OTHERWISE, GOOD CHAPTER! :)

Aw, the romance is blossoming into one of a whirlwind ... it's so cute, seriously. And, to be honset, I wish Id've thought of the story first! LOL!

E! HOW UBERLY SWEET!

Hm ... great chapter! But is the feeling reciprocated by Kayline?

H! Excellent chapter! nice run of climax and stuff! well done!

Weiner is a little suss. What's up WITH him, seriously?