|Reviews for Make Me A Witness|
| Kasatriya chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
Aww! This is so sad...I can relate (except it's with my mother)This is soo good!
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
beautiful layout, I love how you personify faith as beauty...
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
That was brillant ! Beutifully crafted and written with so much emotion ! You have talent , so much so. Never stop writing !
| 6549875654987 chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
I love how this poem is directed to a father (as opposed to a "significant other") fathers are such an everyday occurrence, and yet, a poem about father/child relationships seem refreshingly different. kudos! I love your use of short lines to add emphasis on certain words. again, a great job.
| BloodKnives chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
nice poem. i like how it is a bit confused as how u feel about ur father, or at least that is what it seems. it is good.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
beautifully written... I liek the reference to Jesus... awesome point that I can relate to.. great great poem
| Clear-Water-Jem chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
I love the poem