Reviews for Lullaby For Kayley
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
That is one beautiful piece of work. You certainly have a way with words.
keltica chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
perhaps the best one you wrote of the ones I read up to now ... simple language but avery appealing ...

keltica, the celtic fire from within
SilverAndFlames chapter 1 . 11/12/2004
into the sunrise
of your eyes.
Those lines are great. Well done.:)
hybridelaverna chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
I love your writing style...
Kasatriya chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
Oh! This is soo sweet1 I love it!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
beautiful little piece, I love how the stars and moon are the sunrise, how the dark too has its light.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
delightful, m.
PinkDaydreams chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
i LOVE this...so perfectly simple and sweet. i especially like all of the imagery you used; "the sunrise of your eyes" is nice and ends the poem very well. good job :O)
lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
very sweet. ) this could be like... a real song or something!
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
That was the most beutiful peace of poetry I have read all night. You truely have a gift with words.
CBTD
bloodKnives chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
nice poem. i like how it is short but still good
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
aw so sweet!