Are they gonna break up and get back together in every book? Because its kind of like a theme with them.

the lryics were really good i was reading emo boys do cry yesterday and i couldnt get enough you should write a book!

i enjoyed your first story and sort of enjoyed your second, but by the time i got to your third it was too predictable. It has been following the same formula just a new obstacle, together obstacle break up sadness together. I think there needs to be a little more substance to make this series really great.

I think everything is too simple, I really dont know who matt or angel are other than two people who break up and get back together a lot. Sure i read what they are doing but thats it! I get no emotion no thought, to me they are one dimensional characters that like emo music and crying.

I think if they really did love each other they wouldnt be breaking up so many times, sure i understood the heroin thing and maybe the calling his dad thing, but if they really were in love, they wouldnt just break up because they didn't even love each other enough to keep up their relationship when he was working. Love is work and they arent doing the job.

its also really distracting when you insert those author notes randomly and change povs, you should stick to one thing and leave those notes to the end or integrate them into the story, readers dont want to be taken out of the imaginary world youve created via an authors note.

I think thats about it, think about it and maybe try some rewrites because it can only get better right?

keep writing and improving,

joey

Your writing is just amazing! You are fast becoming my absolute favorite author and inspiration.

It's simply awing!

Well, that was certainly an unexpected turn of events.

I can only imagine what kind of trouble Matt and Angel are going to get into this time...

well ive now read three of your stories in a day. to be honest i would go on and read and forth but i have a mock school day thingy tom. and i need to wake up around 630. then later that day im getting contacts, then i have this movie date thingy with some guy im not that into.

haha. idk why i tell you about my life like i do. i guess im trying to say i wont be able to read another storie tom, but come friday i will be right back at it.

i seem to be hooked on your stories, not quite like drugs [ i got caught and im being drug tested now, so ive rbeen sober for three weeks. its one of the harder things ive had to do, kinda like matt, but not so bad ] but very good.

i put Emo Boys Do Cry on my fav stories, and i would put the rest up but i think it would crowd my fav storie list a bit to much.

i feel bad b/c i only review once im done with one of your stories, not chapie to chapie, but i do like this. dont think otherwise.

umm. ha i talked more about me then the storie, and im terribly sorry if i bore you to tears.

muchmuchmuchlove

xoxoxoxoxoxo

:D

So good!_ I don't really know what to say, just that I love this stories and these characters!_ Totally love 'em! If I had had any more space on my favorites, I would have had all of the Emo Boy Stories there, but sadly; I haven't so I only have the first one!_

Good,good,good! I live the Emo Boy stories!_ ONe chappy left of this one now!_

Very good chapter!_ I hope they get back together soon!_

Short and nice chapter! It was cool reading some of this story in 3rd person!_

Really great chapter!_ But it's a little sad he walked away, but in a way I can understand why he wanted to...!_

Oh, so sad, I liked Deo...! I hope Angel tells him soon, and that they get back together! It's about time!_

Oh no, my happiness just drowned... Matt has a girlfriend...! I already hate the bitch!

Angel, dammit, tell him and take him BACK!_

Yey, Fawn and Hopper!_ They're cute together! But if was sad when Angel's dad died...