Reviews for Routines
Ladiebug chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Hello Harmonized,

It has been ages since I've visited your Fictionpress page, but even all these years later I still have such fond memories of HonoursHill. I came back to reread some of your poetry, and it's amazing me to how I've grown up with your writing. This poem for example, one my younger self loved but didn't quite relate too, is now something I understand perfectly. It's a situation I've experienced, and in my more mature state, something I can really appreciate the quality of. You captured the longing of the heart beautifully.

Perhaps it is impossible for a writer to ever fully grasp how the stories and poems inside their head affect the readers who read them. There are so many intrinsic ways words can be interpreted. Still, I'd like you to know I consider HonoursHill and all your other works as a part of my childhood, and I look back on the days of waiting for you to update and reading those new chapters in my room with a smile.

All the best,

Ladiebug.
unsociable chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
See? I TOLD you I'd be back.

I thought it was a lovely idea, well expressed, but something about it just...didn't click.

Still. I understand this is OLD for you. And probably isn't your BEST work.

About that...I wonder which one is your favourite? Honourshill?

Love

unsociable

PS i realise my review really doesn't mean anything. Meh.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
wonderful! seriously amazing job. i love the idea and you executed it perfectly. BRAVO!
NicolaOS chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
I know you wrote this ages ago but OMIGOD I loved it! TeeHee. It was really good :]
for keeps chapter 1 . 2/21/2008
I'm not sure this review will mean much to you, since you wrote this almost four years ago, but I've read this twice and I think it's gorgeous. It has a great, creative rhythm to it, and you just captured everything about missing someone PERFECTLY.

I really loved it. So very, very good. (:
anamika chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
i had never read this one before... and right now is the exact time i needed it.

thank you for writing it, its beautiful
Amy chapter 1 . 8/27/2007
this is a fricken awesomee poem .

i know exactly what that feels like , but i'd never be able to get it into words as you do .

beautifully written !
ironicdeathx chapter 1 . 3/6/2007
Incredible.

Incredibly written.

Incredibly sad.

Just. Plain. Incredible.
amusedreader chapter 1 . 8/25/2005
absolutely phenomenal!
Miss-Guppy chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
*Glomps* _ Tis tres w00ty Amu. But you forgot to add how w00ty it is when the person comes back!
Armas Apple chapter 1 . 4/18/2005
Woah! I love this poem! I love how you used the same word three times on a line...Yay! Every one can relate! Yep. Routines are part of life, and life, we all have... (unless we are not really alive, LIKE VAMPIRES!)Sry, had too much sugar, I hope you understand... _
Beau Coeur chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Hey! *waves* do you remember me? I remember you and your stories, so good! And this poem, my God! You've gotten way better at writing then you were before which is like, crazy b/c you were so good originally! Jeez, you are gonna be published, I swear you are.

How have you been? I've totally slacked off with writing/reading/reviewing for the past like, year. I dont know why. Well I've actually written quite a bit lately, just haven't posted anything. This summer I wrote a story and I think it actually came out really good, I just haven't posted it or anything, I don't know why. I see you've kept up with writing/posting, taht's awesome. This poem was so good, I absolutely loved it. It's SO unique like, it could very easily have been choppy because of its format, but you made it flow so well and it was just really really good, lol.

Hope you're doing well!Beau Coeur
scotty doesnt know chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
If there was any internet vernacular for the very profound sadness i am feeling now, i would write it. But I'm very computer illiterate, so, clearly, i don't know how to since if I did, I would say it by now. So ... this is the best I could come up with.

*tear* *sob* *STAB* THAT is how sad i feel.

deep, dude. VERY deep.
murky chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
hm, I kind of like it.
Routines is a great title. Cause that's what it is, and it shows how your routines are CHANGED when someone leaves you. Though the piece seems more for when someone has left you for good, though you've said that specifically in your summary: even when you know they're coming back. Maybe I just haven't felt that kind of attachment before. Deprived me.
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Liked all of it, the words. The structure. ( - down, - down, -, - down) The only one part is "tv" yea, the tv fits, as in, yea, people do watch tv to distract themselves. The only thing is that everything else is practically monosyllablic, but this is two. T, V. But that's it. heh. Really like it! )
urBan-chiCa chapter 1 . 10/18/2004
this is so sad...*soBs* but it's good )
sounds matter-of-fact coz of the way it's written, but it pulls on the heartstrings anyway...*soB*