Reviews for Hills
Julie-d112 chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
Beautifully written, great imagery. Love it!
Rocky G chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Wow a beautiful haiku, I love the description of hills. :)

Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Green—Your rolling breasts,

Turquoise you came forth from sea,

Mermaid—Algae—Queen. —m—
David Stephen chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Wow - once again a beautiful Haiku with beautiful images - these are inspirational! Keep up this excellent work!
Demodocus chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
A fresh, enlivening perspective on a topic many view as mundane. Not me, of course. I love the imagery in this, especially in line 2. You have a wonderful talent here. At some point I might write a short story too. By the bye, thanks for reviewing my piece; it was sweet of you to like my user name, especially since I'm male! Feel free to drop me a line if you wanna chat or something. Incidentally, a college chum of mine and I used to sit in a graveyard near campus and just talk: about life, friends, pretty much anything. Those were some of the best times of my life. We went at night too. Mark sometimes swore he could see movement even when no one was around! Okay, sorry, I'm getting off topic. Great haikmu! Keep writing. Bryan