|Reviews for Slumber|
| Siberia82 chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
Simple, but beautiful. Bravo!
| fatalkaiser chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
I liked it. Most Haikus just look like the words were thrown together and left to fend for themselves but yours was simple and got the point accross. Well done.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
i liek it.. especially that last line
| Gracie Lou Freebush chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Great haiku! Perfect number of syllables and nice word choice. If only I could get enough sleep myself!
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
In another world,
Mind finds—Time—to heal itself,
Start each day anew. —m—
| David Stephen chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Absolute genius! DS
| Tipped chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
AW! its so cute! thanx for your reviews (the first i had gotten in a long time), sorry i couldn't get back sooner. This is great, love it!
| Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
Cool poem... I have also written something about sleep/dreams recently (not in haiku though). Its so refreshing to read this haiku. I wish I could curl up in my bed and go to dreamland...