Reviews for Slumber
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
Simple, but beautiful. Bravo!
fatalkaiser chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
I liked it. Most Haikus just look like the words were thrown together and left to fend for themselves but yours was simple and got the point accross. Well done.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
i liek it.. especially that last line
Gracie Lou Freebush chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Great haiku! Perfect number of syllables and nice word choice. If only I could get enough sleep myself!
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
In another world,

Mind finds—Time—to heal itself,

Start each day anew. —m—
David Stephen chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Absolute genius! DS
Tipped chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
AW! its so cute! thanx for your reviews (the first i had gotten in a long time), sorry i couldn't get back sooner. This is great, love it!
Miz E. Mak chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
Cool poem... I have also written something about sleep/dreams recently (not in haiku though). Its so refreshing to read this haiku. I wish I could curl up in my bed and go to dreamland...
write on.