Reviews for Moonlit Girl
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
I like the line "And sighed into each other"

that's a curious ending...
method acting chapter 1 . 9/5/2005
Last stanza-kickass. 2nd to last stanza-AWESOME. You have such a way of phrasing things, so real and raw. As if you were a jaded figment of my imagination, telling me everything, now. I feel as if my comments glance off you, like you aren't real. You seem only to be passion. Wonderful.
kit feral chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
"Green-eyed girl seeks her Blue eyed boy, Hopefully he'll be here soon, Green-eyed girl loves her Blue eyed boy, But they don't talk about the moon." Wow. So beautifully sad. This was a really powerful piece- I enjoyed it. Keep it up!
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
nice and sweet. good job.
ChristophersGoddess chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
its sad... but excellent.. nice job!