|Reviews for Plastic People|
| Prieda Solo chapter 1 . 12/11/2007
wow. I love this. I like it a lot. i might have to read it a few more times to get the connection between the first and the second stanze, but otherwise...wow.
you know what I like best? The rhythm. This has a lovely rhythm too it, the words bounce along well and fit in perfectly without sounding contrived. And the ending is perfect, really great.
The last four lines are probably the best lines of poetry I've read for some time :) I would say as a point of concrit though that the first four lines don't quite work as wonderfully well as the rest of the piece. But overall I do like this a lot, great work D
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
That is really good. It seemed to make sense in a not making sense kind of way. I'm speechless.