Reviews for Pressure
rainbowskye chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
Ah, so nicely written, and I swear that it's like reading something that was been constructed to fit my own life.. Well, obviously people can have similar experiences. Anyhow, I liked this, especially the following part:
"Parent's pressure
Parent said
Can't do anything
But listen instead"
And I think that that is simply because I really liked the quick pace of that section. But overall it does have a nice rhythm.