Reviews for Recent Insights into the Nature of the Universe
Jennacharm chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Eloquent. I really like the 'falling poetry' one. Maybe you should have title for each one? These are carefully thought out, and nicely on FP. Very hard to find.

- Jennacharm
shadowed-chaos chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
I really like that! Use of words are so out there. Um sorry about my poem. My first one ever and I only wrote it in the 8th grade. No hard feelings or anything. I'll just delete it I guess. Anyways, I think it's a totally great haiku.
Teperehmi chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
Once again, nice work! (I have a new story out)
HeadofVecna chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
Actually defenestrated is a word (you can look it up you know), and that is a 5-7-5 haiku, so I'm not sure what you are referring to.
Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
The first one is definetly the best. In fact the first one is fantastic.
Toph Gonzalez chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
Powerful haikus! Very unique, ?I especially like the first one... Keep writing
nine iron chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
'Defenestrated ' is not a word! Just that correction and that lines number to be in keeping with the 5'7'5 format you have chosen to use.
Keep writing
Nine Iron