Reviews for Breathing Life Into a Statue
bubublacz chapter 3 . 2/6/2014
Gawd she is overbearing! But I really liked the way you captured her POV. I was scanning through stories which made me bored real fast. Glad that I stopped by this one. Now I'm fully awake and can't wait to get to the next parts :D
Pranali chapter 5 . 5/3/2013
The story line is fine so far, but the writing style is very awkward. If you're writing about teenagers, try to think about words that we use in normal day to day language. We don't say patrons, we say customers. In trying to sound mature, you're making it sound informal. Also, there are some grammatical errors. Like above, if the girl is already thinking in a stream of consciousness, you don't need to use parentheses for any side notes.
Minkaos chapter 22 . 4/12/2013
Aww, I really really enjoyed reading this story! Adrienne is absolutely hilarious and I adore Dylan. They are really good for each other and very cute together.
Teen chapter 4 . 3/31/2013
Aw, Adrienne is adorable. The way she flits from arrogance to some decency really works for this story. Well done!
HeadOverHeelsInHate chapter 22 . 1/22/2013
Awwww! So freaking cute! Love it! I like how you tied the title in with the ending! Eek! Amazing!
junebird28 chapter 22 . 1/19/2013
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! Loved the characters amd the writing style. There weren't many cliches, despite the cliche ish base story. I loved reading their relationship develop. Good job :D
The Beauty of Lies chapter 22 . 1/18/2013
Your characters really threw me for a loop.. I mean sure, they weren't physically described very very much [ i mean like, every excrutiating detail of everywhere want suuper long. You let the readers fill in some edges too] buuut, the way they acted was true to themselves, all the way, and I just love that, even if adrienne is mean and stuff, she doesn't hide underneath shame for infoicting pain, and in the end she accepts she's felt a lot of it. Buuut is still slightly annoying, rude and self entitled. I never thought i could like a character like her! I mean in some stories you laugh at them, or they are portrayed as pitiful beings.. But Adrienna wiped that stereotype away. I wonder, was she a hard character to work with? Was making the changes within Dylan hard? He really was so lifeless in the beginning, I was beginning to wonder if Adrienne wouldn't get dumped and then we would be skipping to her elderly years, wondering about her first love. That just wouldnt be the coolest end to our characters... Speaking of which, I believe there is a story yet to be told with Monique, or even Sinjun... Why is her name that? It could have been a cover name, but Sinjun? Why not Anne, or Blakely, lr uhm... XD i bet the story she has to tell is a good one. Ill be reading other works f yours, of course! :D can't let the world think my insomnia is cured, after all. Im not sure how you feel about it, but this felt a lot like... I dont know, it had an animeish feel, like how the author in a manga really sort of diga into their character until every motion is important and you have to pay attention to the narrators words to get it sometimes? You sort of write like that, and I guess it's what got me hooked. Best of luck!
dwpea chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
This was so refreshing. I was so sick of the same type of heroine and needed a kickass rich bitch to revive my love for romance stories! Thank you! I thoroughly enjoyed the story and have recommended it to everyone.
Doughnuts chapter 22 . 1/13/2013
I just finished reading your story and I think its amazing!
brinalovesyouxx chapter 22 . 11/12/2012
Such a sweet and cute story! I absolutely loved it. Aweslme work, keep it up and i hope to read more of your stories :D xx
Guest chapter 21 . 9/22/2012
gosh dis is awesum 22 chapters r like KILLER ppl think r not i LOVE ADRENNIE more dan DLYAN he is very much LIKEABLE ..kudos to HER nd of course u for dis amazing piece of WORK great job ..! its awesum
Guest chapter 6 . 9/22/2012
Can you imagine how I feel? Even in fake relationships I'm being cheated on! How pathetic is that? dis line HURT me lot ..gosh :(
Guest chapter 5 . 9/22/2012
i dnt know adrienne is COLD bitch but not HEARTLESS i actutally felt REALLY bad for her :( in dis chapter i LIKE HER 3
Ryonee chapter 22 . 8/1/2012
What a cute ending! In the beginning the characters seem 2d, but you make it better with each chapter. Adrienne slowly grow on me. I enjoy reading this story so much!
dreeming chapter 22 . 7/21/2012
There is so much love for this. You write such spunky characters! Well, I read this straight for about 5hrs, well into a solid all-nighter (no regrets), so I can't write sanely much more as my brain is mush from all that Dylan-ness in one go, and, this is a long sentence that hopefully makes sense, and, yeah, basically I love your story, goodnight
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