Reviews for The Hypocrite
Elliptical Shapes chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
I think if i was born with a vagina my poetry would mimick yours almost completely.

Who is it relating to anyway? Someone who fkd your head up?
Rimbaud's Whore chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Hey Caroline! This is Rozzy or Just Wolf in a different account. I tried to email you a couple of times but I kept on getting them sent back to me. Anyway, I'm here under a new name - despite boredom and fustration at this sight and writing in general, I seem to be addicted!

About you poem here - your rhymes make it amazing, it's very powerful and sardonic. I love hwo you create a lyrical quality, it's like liquid anger.
Sublime Rhapsody chapter 1 . 10/21/2004
*claps hands in applause* FINALLY! Someone has written something true! I really like your rhyming scheme. It's really cool. Nice job. Hipocracy sucks $$! Please review my work sometime!