this is so cute.. the stuff bolded sounds just so perfect, like the first time.. ) io hope my first time is like this, but not in someone's home.. ) great job... cant wait until you write more... )

This story was really great. It left behind a greater meaning of life. Although it was morbid, the cutting sections enhanced the story and the description was excellent. Look forward to reading more of your stories.

...Hm...I'm not sure what to say. It's good in a sad sort of way. This is just a suggestion but maybe you should change the way you're writing it. I mean, instead of the bold, double-spacing, doing it normally. Anyway, good job at it.

hey, sorry it took so long for me to get here... but here i am, i love the story, its sad, but its true... i could relate in a few ways... well done, a few grammar problems but who cares... well done!

its cool to be able to read the start of your book! i already know the middle! its so cool!

O-O Thats not nice... But at least we know why he did it now. And how shes holding up... Nice story. Sad, almost twisted in a few ways, but... Good.

Here I am finally! I thought the new chapters (new to me) were really powerful. What is it you don't like about them?

I liked the last one, where is seemed Quartz was gettign a little closure by going to his grave and all. . . I'm curious to see how you will wrap this up. :)

I'll talk to you soon hun. _

very good now...sorry i couldn't finish right away, it's been a while since i've gotten on here to conitnue reading...i'll finish soon though, i promise

I loved this chapter so much. it's really good. i love this story... Quartz's vision of Matt was so awesome... i hope that's not the wrong thing to say, but i mean it.. you're good that this story. i plan to read the next chapter soon. i hope you update soon though.. very good.. *claps*

hey, theres no way you're getting worse at this, i really like this chapter. Definately sorts out some things. yeah we have to meet up at some stage, sorry for not talking to you in ages i've had no credit either. anyway enjoy the mid term, Conor

I... wow... first off, I want to say, thank you so much for your review! I'm very flattered *even though I don't think I'm all that great a writer. Heh, sometimes I think I lack originality* And second, originality, that was my favorite part of this story. It had a passion, and it was different, not the same old teen angst. It kept me online for hours reading it until I'd finished! Awesome job. I actually felt Quartz's pain as she went along. Imagined how it would be to lose the one you love more than anything...

Amazing. I loved it and I'll definetely be reading more of your work!

amazing...like always

oh my god...i feel like i'm about to cry. this was so beautiful, so fucking amazing. oh my god, i love this so much, oh my god...i can't describe how amazing this was...it was beautiful. beautiful, so sad, so powerful...god. this was so awesome...i loved it. i think i'm going to cry...please, please keep writing!

first of all, thank you for your review - i greatly appreciate it. _ as for the story, it was absolutely excellent. i loved it, & i don't like a lot of stories on here. this was very nicely written - your style is eloquent & makes the story even more interesting. i'll definitely keep reading this, excellent job.

I love it! I just love it! It's so great and 're just such a good writer..

Love u!Tona