Braids are so unprofessional though :-(
I guess i have a namesake here.. :P

I absolutely loved this story. How in the world did I miss out on it for so long? Bravo! I ended up reading the entire story tonight and slacked on my work. Great story!

I don't know where you go with this story, and I'll continue reading because I'm interested, but Alora comes off very hypocritical. She's internally whining about how men aren't chivalrous anymore, and yet she's completely rude and selfish herself. She couldn't manage to be gracious and kind to a man who had done nothing wrong except have an impatient look on her face. And not only that, she congratulates herself for her rudeness, she sees nothing wrong with it.

This is the third time I have read the entire story. Undoubtedly, it is well written. It also has characters which stay with you. Drake and Alora have become almost real over time. Thank you for sharing this with us.

I still love re reading this story.I wish there was more xoxo

An excellent story. Well worth reading for a second time.

that was amazing, refreshingly warm and not all mushy. I like how it wasn't all about romance, she didn't base her life on a whimsical and drop everything for the guy, except Xander, but he was more of an escape than her putting her whole life on him. It did frustrate me a little that there were many grammatical errors, however I do believe that it was a rough draft and has not yet been edited? I'm not sure. It was a good story and although predictable. I still wanted to read all the way through, in one of those I need to know what happened ways.

I am not yet sure what to make of this story or these characters just yet but I am intrigued and it's a safe bet that I'll read on. Alora's name stood out in a good way, I like the sound of it. The Suit, I like that he's identified by this moniker but I worry about overuse. However, so far, so great.

Okay so I know you finished this story ages ago, but I just had to review it! First off I just want to say that I was hesitant in the beginning. I'm the type of person that want a little romance from the start to keep the story interesting for me, sue me that's how I am :D So after 30 chapters of smiles and amusing dialogue, even I have to admit I impressed myself with holding out so long. When you ended the story with a simple kiss and a date to finalize their relationship, I was a little disappointed. But hey it wasn't that bad I told myself. And then came chapter 39 and it all but made up for chapter 38! The fact that Drake was nervous to ask for her hand made me squeal! Thank you for that one; it completed the story for me :P So yeah that's about all I wanted to say. Well done and thanks for sharing this with us!

OMG, this was probably THE most cutest romantic story ever! I think I just slowly died inside...why can't my love life be like this? I love the pacing of the story as well, it was perfect. :)

This is such a beautiful story and i enjoyed every second of it! :) Thank you for sharing your imagination and talent in such an interesting, romantic, suspenseful, and comical way! I absolutely adored it! It would be nice to see one glimpse into the future but it's not something i would insist on as well... the way you let the imagination flow is also perfect. Up to you I guess... Thanks again!

This was extremely WONDERFUL!
A few spelling errors in all of the chapter, but still readable.
I loved this, and its plot. This was a great story.

Awwww! What an amazing story! I love every bit or it! You write well, but there are rare typos here and there, and I read your earlier comment about not having an editor, but that's okay!

I love how their relationshipso much! Alora and Drake are so cute together! I really want to read more.

Cheers,
TQL

Finished this story a while back and never reviewed. Sorry about that!
Overall I found this piece to be pretty good. :D Loved the character development throughout. As a reader I literally found myself frustrated that Alora wasn't pairing up with our leading man. At some points when I read, I recall shouting at my computer in vain (as I do sometimes when writing my own characters too. I call it tough love.) Loved the descriptions used on scenery and the situations our main characters were placed in. I found this piece to be very unique and enjoyable. Great job! :)

Can I tell you just how much I loved this story? I even started drinking my coffee with nutmeg and it's delicious! My parents still give me odd looks about it though.
Mm, I really liked the pace and that it wasn't at all like the romances I've read; you not only built affection towards him but also made me grinning like a fool every time they had a 'lunch'. It's a pretty story. And big. I live pretty and big and awesomely written stories.
Alora is very childish sometimes but I find this to be one of her artist's charm, I can see how much she has grown up. And well, Drake is so polite it's annoying! But then you imagine how much you'd like if somebody held their door for you just like him.
I think the Epilogue is very nice indeed. So pleasant to read and leaves a lot to our imagination.
As you can see, I read this story non-stop and loved every bit of it! Thank you (:

Keep writing!

-KusmiTea