Aw, no suit,

but oh well.

You've made all the boys in this story so loveable,

even Mr. Mooney.

I want Matt for my older brother,

aha, but luckily, I'm the eldest. :)

Curiouser and curiouser.

I want to know more about Drake, dang it.

I may read more, may not.

I mean- I'll finish the story of course, but I don't know if I have it in me to read the remaining eighteen chapters or something close to that.

If I don't finish them tonight, I will most likely finish them tomorrow afternoon or evening or maybe tomorrow night- maybe all those combined, who knows.

I love your writing style, by the way.

I think this would make for a great book,

one that would most certainly sell.

I don't know who I love more. Xander or Drake.

Kay.. I lied. I love Drake more, of course.

But if I had to date one for a while, I'd go with the bad boys. Bad boys are sexy.

Alora is amazing.

I just love her attitude towards life.

Not to mention, I hate math, too.

I just recently dropped out of pre-cal because it got too complicated. Now my schedule is all messed up, but whatever.

This was an amazing chapter, just like all the others. I'll have chapter 13 done in no time.

Xander is sexy.

That's my review for this one.

I'm getting tired. .

Finally, Alora has a date. I was beginning to think she was some sort of pariah that boys strayed from.

I feel bad for Drake. I would give him a hug, if he were real that is. That's not a fun way to spend Christmas- all work and no play. I never thought that idea sounded too fun.

Maybe I should rethink journalism or I could just feign happiness as a business woman.

Neither sounds too fun.

I'll stop rambling. Anyway, it's ten past midnight and I can't stop reading. My eyes are glued to the screen and they hurt. :

My reviews are getting annoying, I apologize.

The suit never fails to surprise me.

One second he acts like a total jerk and the next, he's like this super nice guy that I want to hug.

So strange.

Ugh, it frustrates me.

But once again- amazing.

28-19.. I could never see myself having lunch, even as friends, with someone nine years older than me.

Want to know what's pathetic?

I had to count the difference on my fingers. Stupid me.

Anyway, I can't wait to read chapter 9. I'm in the middle of writing chapter two to my story "Missing Pages", but I can't seem to get into it because your story is distracting me.

NOTHING distracts me from writing, so that means your story is pretty good.

Back to the suit.. I really love him.

I want my own suit.

Your story is going to make it absolutely impossible for me to actually find a boyfriend where I live.

None of them walk around in business suits and talk like that. That's too bad. Mostly because Drake's dialogue makes him sound totally hot.

I've completely fallen in love with this story.

I love their relationship.

My mom and I kind of have that tension,

but for the most part, she's proud of my career decision.

Not that I've actually graduated high school yet, that's not happening until June and then I can worry about careers and whatnot.

Anyway, I love her mother.. she's interesting and so pushy about the boyfriend thing.

Such a mother, but I suppose that is the point after all.

I'll shut up about the suit now.

To answer your question about Alora- I really like her character.

I like her whole persona.

Most definitely, I love her attitude toward "the suits."

And I love that she calls Drake 'the suit' instead of Drake.

Alora reminds me of myself in a way,

mostly because she has that sarcastic attitude towards life.

I love people like that.

The chapters just keep getting better.

Goodness, I want my own Drake.

He's sweet.. in a strange way, but sweet nonetheless.

I think he has a thing for Alora, but that is just me.

I'll continue reading.

Normally, I'd be bored with a story, but yours keeps dragging me in.

Goodness, I'd freak if I cried in public.

Poor Alora.

I had a bad day like that once.. they suck majorly.

I take back what I said about the suit.

This story is keeping me on the edge of my seat,

hope I don't fall off.

The suit is SUCH A JERK.

I want to jump through the screen and punch him maybe once or twice or maybe kick him where the sun don't shine.

No but seriously this is really good,

I'll definitely read the rest and review it.

Another chapter of super goodness (although no Drake, even if Alora's friends' persistance may end up winning her over!)

I loved how you explored a bit of Drake's character: it makes him seem more human. By the way, doesn't he have any friends?

I was very surprised that Grandma Fairfield (ooh the disrespect!) was so mild in her reaction to Alora's news: she was a bit sharp, that's for sure, but not as unbearable as I thought she would be (but then again it IS Drake we're talking about so I guess all that money and his good name mollified her! :))

Matt and Renee? Weid but nice I suppose; I'd just like to follow the progress on the dress, or is Alora not supposed to see it before the day of the ball?

Last thing: I loved the salad touch: non only does it look like a good one, but the fact that she's letting Drake into her life indirectly made me happy! What can I say? I'm a fervent Drake's supporter!

Good luck with the studying and schedule arranging!