poor alora :(

hi, love your work please update, and i really hope drake and alora end up together soon. bye

I'm late in reviewing as usual...hopefully you'll have time and read it before getting the next one out.. the big highlight in this chapter is definitely the Wilbard-ey thing...yes, he's a thing, a horrible, goosebumps- giving thing..but at the same time so ridiculous he's funny..Too bad we don't see more of the elder Mooneys though..a little quarrell could have been funny (and almost no Xander..yeah!Victory to Drake 1-0).

The meal itself gives a kind of peaceful feeling (like two old friends) but it's really difficult to guess what Drake feels at anytime (he's sweet but kind of..blank, as far as emotions go..or so it seems) especially compared to Alora.

Hope you're doing well

Good luck for everything

Lou

Interesting story. (omg. the lights just went out in our house, just like that. scary.) It's going kinda slowly though. I want there to be some "romantic" chemistry between Drake and Alora. hehe. Your story makes me want to become a potter. I wonder if I should take some classes... )

once again, you deserve so much more reviews then what you've got, the story is going along great though the development between Alora and Drake is a bit slow

okat first of all WOW! this is great. I just sat and read it all in one sitting so i'm kinda tired but bear with me.

I love the descriptions you give and the characters are really well portrayed. I like Drake, he's funny and seems so different to Alora. I like how Alora seems childish sometimes because it makes her that little bit more believable.

well done and great work.

Maybe it's just me, but the main character seems to cynical. Almost approaching immaturity at some points.

In no way am I flaming, and I will be the first to admit to many a character fault.

Overall, I like the style, but it seems to change when dialogue is introduced, perhaps an inner dialogue would suit this style better...?

awesome chapter once again. i want to know more about drake, but i suppose everyone does, including alora. i cant wait for more so please update soon

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Woo hoo! Drake's in a chattier mood! X3

But then he goes and quiets down again... .That party... oh god, that guy was awful. . Stupid Wilibard the sixth. .

Looksie: Alora and Drake shared a moment there, didn't they? X3

I'm so happy it's not even funny ! XD

hey great chapter though a lil bit confusing. why is drake acting weird?please update soon!

Oi, out of curiosity... did a family member of his die? His mom? Maybe that's why he's so upset? And then it snowballed from there at work?

oi what's wrong with drake?

hahah, i see that this story is updated, i flip to the right page and the first thing I see is my name... bolded .

hahahaha. Well, the point of posting stories on fictionpress is to get noticed and get feedback on your work. Everyone posts what can only be called drafts. Inconsistency is quite common and nothing to worry about. Good stories will still be good stories :D keep up the good work~! Can't wait to read more. :D

Feeling whiny today...and Drake isn't up to his amusing self either..guess I need to fabricate some kind of plan involving the messy demise of the individual named Xander ( I know..wasn't in this chapter, but I just can't stand him)Alora's family seems a lot more messed up than I'd guessed..Her mother seemed like a very stern person ( very hung up on appearance) but maybe there's more to her than that..though it DOES seem strange that Alora isn't more concerned than that about her disappearing..Is she used to it?Anyway great chapter like always..good luck for everything (nad yes, I mean life in general not only the story:))

ke ke ke ke ek eke ke keke! X3Drake is sort of, kind of beginning to open up to Alora, but he doesn't want to... he had to insult Alora to get her to stop asking about his life's woes. XD

Intruiging ideas? Like what? O_O Wonder, wonder... and a bad fight between the parents that possibly wound up with Mrs. Mooney going back to her parents house (hence being gone for days, likely in the lap of luxury during that time, coddled by mommy and daddy.) and the poor Misters Mooney alone to fend for themselves at home... honestly, how do guys get to be that old and never learn to cook for themselves ever? XD I still can't wait to see where this goes: You had no idea how happy this update alone made me: the chapter was wonderful as well. For once, Alora arrived before Drake? Swet! XDI just don't know what's going to happen next! Can't wait to see what's heading our way, so I'll eagerly await its arrival. X3 I am SUCH a fan of this story! XD