this story definitely deserves much more reviews. eventhough i dont have anything constructive to say, i felt like adding to the numbers by saying that your story is simply amazing. continue the updates quickly!

The story is still good, but i'm beginning to wonder if you have any idea where you're taking it. where is the real plot-carrying conflict? is there going to be one? i'll keep reading so long as you keep writing.

I like this chapter I wonder what's up with the suite? Um...

new reader. i love the story so far, cant wait to read more so update quickly. oh, one more thing, i thought that you stopped getting grades in college. isnt it 'disinctions, credit, pass...' instaed of A,B,Cs?i like the name alora too, never heard it, quite unique

Hello there. I tend to review as I read through, so don't mind the random bits of comments.

Haha, a good opening paragraph. My one complaint would be that a good amount of those sentences begin in 'she.' Not anything major, just something to tweaked me a bit.

"Charcoal blue perfectly creased slacks that screamed "dry-clean only" matched a tailored jacket over an icy-blue collared shirt and silk lavender-coloured tie contrasted harshly to the faded, ripped, and wrinkled jeans Alora wore with a slightly newer blue T-shirt with a few smears of dust and cracked writing saying "I swear on my ex’s soon to be grave, it’s just red paint!", and a tired old jean jacket."-Overall I like this line, but it's extremely long, which detracts from its quirkiness. Splitting it up into two sentences or something of the like could help.

"Alora's gold locks, just taken down from her messy bun[ ]were already."-There's a comma missing there.

"Kendra paid, leaving a handful of silver and copper coins for the barista, though she accepted the handful of bills presented to her by the barista."-Again, not a big deal, but you use both 'handful' and 'barista' twice in this sentence.

Heh. I like how Alora calls this man 'the suit.'

Amusing scene with the nutmeg, too. Good work, Alora!

"Alora just shook her head. "Your employee number? Awesome!"-Normally I'd advise against double punctuation. I'm not sure it's illegal or anything, but it detracts from the story a bit, especially if it's a good one like this.

And a good way to end the story. I like it-a good, fun read. You have a very nice writing style-to the point, and fun to read. I'm not sure where you're going with the suit guy, but I look forward to reading the next chapter!

great as ever( please update pretty please?

hello you lovely writer-friend of mine!reading your story brightens my day. i love it muchly.i also love this matt character. i would give him a cookie! i can't wait to see what big role he plays in this entire . i hope your new classes are satisfying. you should come up to visit sometime. write more soon. i'll be looking forward to reading. later days, kiddo!

i found this by chance, and i'm intrigued by the suit! i'm still quite unsure to what the relationship is between them - but i am secretly hoping that xander becomes some sleazebag and tries to rape her and drake comes along to save the day. ehehehe. age aint nothing but a number i say. :D

i would love to be on the mailing list, too, pretty please. :)

i havent read stories on fictionpress for quite some time and i'm glad to have come across this one - i love your style of writing and i cant wait to read more!

take care!

ok, this is actually a comment for chapter 15. I've noticed that you said Alora's grandparents pay for tuition, but in the beginnig chapters, you made a big point on her being independent and buying everything herself. what's up with that?

... write more...

and i don't like Xander T_T

go Drake! w07! XD

Yuy

no! drop Xander! what are you, crazy? :S

hahahah, good story. very intense

keep it up ne?

You can't leave me hanging like that..I waited forever for this chapter, please keep going i really like this stopry.

great u updated! love u an hope for more updates!

Gah, finally! How long have I waited for a new chapter of Nutmeg? XDI was actually surprised to see the update! Okay, now a question to bring up: Did you not originally refer to Alora's mother as Ms. Dorian before she suddenly became Ms. Mooney? O_O Because I am majorly confused on that issue. Drake's showing more of his colors than ever before in this chapter, and we even learn a little more about Xander. X3 Lots of character development here, hon. I love ya. X3

Huh... hey, wouldn't it be a total gas is Fearborn turned out to be one of those suits at Alora's grandparent's party? HA, that would be a blast! Well, at least she'd have someone to talk to that won't bore her to tears... unfortunately, it might cause some consternation because her parents and grandparents are all going to start hearing wedding bells when they find out that she knows Drake. XD Man, that would suck for her, wouldn't it? XD Anyway, I love where this story could head, and I'm rooting for you! Can't wait to see the next chapter, obviously, but I anxiously await the turnout of the story overall. We're sticking with you, Dragen! X3

those two are cute...but where's the suit?haha i love my unexpected rhymes