very good update

Hmm.. this story seems nice, quite mysterious- I wonder where it'll all lead too.. keep updating! You're doing a great job )

Very nice story so I bookmarked it. Gr... I feel exactly the same as Alora and I pity her kinda, Drake is mean! If they would turn into a couple he needs to shrink his big ego. Hehe, I still like him! Btw, what is his occupation anyway? I always wondered, is he a computer junkie and owns a multi-million company? Anyway, keep up the great work!

YAY! heh, You made my day. ok, you made it a long time ago (I read this ages ago and was too DAMN LAZY to review), but seeing that dedication all over again has made my PMS-y day better. So, yah, I'm sure you can tell that I'm a girl from that. (: haha. urgh, irritating. Anyway, this will be a short review 'cause I have prelims coming up next week and I'm pretty sure I'm not going to be able to finish studying! hm, I'm enjoying their interactions. It seems pretty unfair that he's so much more confident and seemingly comfortable with who he is. Seems to me that Alora keeps defending herself, lots, instinctively. yeah, even when he hasn't said anything discriminating. haha, poor thing, it's so ingrained in her! Hopefully that'll get better (: thanksyu once again for the dedication! teehee. Have a great week, k!

just figured out i'd better drop a line or two or you'd think I was dead or would be a pity as the story is taking such an exciting turn..Is Drake actually chasing Alora or is it just my fevered imagination?The leftovers part was so good..he 's totally leading the game (gah...want one too) even if he has this irritating habit of calling Alora Nutmeg..(but don't we all love seeing Alora fuming at everything he does?)Good luck Good luck Good luck ( I figured 3 times would somehow make up for the fact I missed the previous chapter..but I'll try and find time to review it as well, I promise)lou

I really like how its turning out. And its funny how drake is just taking control for lunch dates. The rich and poor thing could make some good arguments and fights for Alora and Drake. I love her nickname as well... 'Nutmeg'... He must really get a kick out of teasing her. You really have a good story you know? Thanks. ~Wisdoms

I can tell you're having fun writing this story! It shows. Even though Alora hates the nickname Drake gave her, i'm sure deep down she doesn't mind it so much. Theres nothing better than an argument to get things going! Get chapter 10 typed up as soon as you can, i know you're busy.

P.S. Any chance i can get a sneak peak at chapter 10!

Aw Alora got mad at Drake...it's cute how Kendra compares Drake and Alora as a couple. Great chapter.

good chapter.. alora is so impulsive and imature, but i like her any ways.. drake seems to have her pretty much figured out which is fun because it pisses her off so much. as always, update soon!

oy! vegan burgers. although, i imagined alora as the type of person who would enjoy this chapter was amazing as well [nothing new there]. i loved the little note-scene [such a gentleman he is]... and his nickname for her [nutmeg. cute! perfect].but anyway... how's college going for you? i'm glad you have had enough time to be writing lots. you're still planning on coming to ku next year, right? that would rock my pants!okay. i will hopefully remember to reply to that email from a million years ago. 'til then, bye kid.

kelly-b, i love you and this story. it made my i have realized that i didn't review this chapter last time, so i'm going to be giving you two reviews today. yaay. [and the townsmen rejoice!]this drake-fellow is absolutely fantabulous! quite a character. i want to huggle him [yes. exactly. huggle]. alora and him make such an awkwardly-wonderful disfunctional couple. it's brilliant.

Not bad. A tad choppy in general, but I'm curious to see where you're going with the story. good job and good luck.

oh... you have to update soon! I'm intruiged. very good story.

haha.. now I really like the suit. Why is she so uptight about raiding the fridge though? good descriptions. Suit is a bit weird though... I mean chopping vegetables? where does he get those skills?

good chapter. hehehe the waiter.