well I like Alora and I'm not so sure about the suit. He's extremely stiff. He needs more edge. But Alora is very human and I love art. so i think she's cool.

you use good verbage. Like mulling.

the part where she started crying was a bit odd and forced. But besides that really good. I like your descriptions of the apartment and the brief characterizations of her roommates.

good descriptions still. And I like Alora's personality.

wow. I have to say this is probably one of the best stories I've read on fictionpress. Your grammar and descriptions are really tight and you seem to have a good plot and you didn't go overboard girly on it. I'll keep reading the next chapters.

I didn't like this chapter as much as the others.

M cheetos... lucky DaVinci. You're evil, you know that? Sending the suit to Japan before I get the chance to go! I dislike scary health food nuts... okay, so that's not true. I don't like Drake as a health food nut. He's kinda sounding like Ranger... only he eats Cheetos and let Alora have coffee. Okay, so maybe he's not as bad as Ranger in the health food department... but still! And I was reading the response to the reviews... I think that you should dedicate part of a chapter to Alora going home for Christmas! You could make it a flashback/memory type thing. Or she could tell Drake about it during their lunch date! Can't wait for nine!

well i'm still enjoying this, and wondering what sort of turn the plot will take. update soon!

Ok, you can't yell at me for taking a long time to review this chapter. Anyway on to the stuff you want to hear/know. You had to throw that part in about being a potter, lol. Nice to that Alora is starting warm up a bit more to Drake! Can't wait for the next chapter!

First off, i just want to say sorry it took my so long to review this chapter. Secondly, i love the nickname Drake gave Alora, nutmeg suits her very well. Enjoyed this chapter very much! Off to read and review the next one!

Hello! Haven't seen you in a while (figuratively speaking. haven't seen you before at all p) It might just be me, or the suit may just be as such, but I thought the conversations they had were rather abrupt. No embellishments. Just answer the question with a short answer. Or make a short appropriate comment. It might just be his character though p HAHAHA, and I wonder just how long he thought before deciding that he wanted to be "friends". This should be fun.

Aww that's cool, Drake and Alora are finally starting to get along. I bet they'll be good friends. ;)

Great story! I really like the characters of Alora and Drake! Can't wait til your next chapter!

i like this alot! i'm wondering where the plot is going, but for the time being im just enjoying your good grammer and funny characters, though as a good-natured criticism, they still seem rather two-dimensional. i'll keep an eye out for an update!

i really like this chapter because it shows the more humanistic side of Drake and how he's not just a typical suit :)