Now it reminds me of a cross between "Daria" and "My Fair Lady". Ya' know I think Lori is starting to remind me of myself. (I carry a sketchbook with me too!) My favorite line in this chapter: "Do you have OCD?" I actually think I do :)

I love your style of writing... and your sarcasm... and Alora's sarcasm. I also love how Alora's mom calls her Lori. Actually I think it's a pretty name spelled that way. I have a friend named Lori.

Again, reminds me of Daria and Tom from the cartoon series "Daria".

This is an excellent story. Very well written for an amateur. It reminds me of an episode of the TV show "Daria", except Daria would be the artist instead of Jane.

WAI~! Now I want to name my cat Nutmeg. I will have a cat named Nutmeg, just you watch! Anyway! I think... Gods forbid... Drake is starting to grow on me. Has to be because of that discussion we had about his hair. And I don't like Molly. And what kind of sports car? Did you mention that? If you didn't give him a 2005 Blue Ford Mustang Convertable? haha. And another thing, when you described him at the chair I pictured three people: Drake, Mwu, and Hatori. Don't ask. It's just, I don't know, an attractive pose I guess. Well, you know I adore this story. What else can I say that I haven't already told you? Oh yeah, MAKE ALORA AND DRAKE GET TOGETHER! Haha. Well, first they need to come to an understanding. Maybe Alora should come up with an annoying/weird nickname for Drake too since he calls her Nutmeg. Okay, I think I've said enough for one review. Update soon Sissy-kins!

Yay, I'm expecting chapter 8 soon since you've got part of it down. Glad you enjoyed your road trip! I want to go on one too. lol. and maybe you'll hit 10 reviews this time? You're getting there, that's for sure! ) I absolutely LOVE the exchange between Alora and Drake. He's a very interesting character. Like how he just asserted himself and helped out with dinner hot chocolate (chocolate, yum!). I'm wondering what his background is though, cause I don't think most businessmen (who're rich) do their own dishes, etc.

YAH!It's so good!And Drake is still yummy!Loves the snow storm twist that's just plain fun, especially if you imagine Alora..(I'm laughing my head off) though she appears a bit shy here..what's happening?Drake is going to make her crazy!And he manages it so well!( Do you have a live model for him or is he just a figment of your imagination..?Because I want one!:)Is Rose going to make an appearance soon? I'd love to see her in front of DrakeGood luck!lou

you were in canada this whole time? canada?dude! i thought school had temporarily killed you [as it had done to me]. and you hadn't updated in so long! i was worried!this was a fun chapter. you really see a new side of the suit... makes you really really start liking him. oh, what a fun kid. so you already know about the mass street shop [that doesn't surprise me]. that's awesome! i have a thing for the little laughing buddhas and they have many many of them and that makes me hey, email me and let me know about summer. and let me know if your'e ever bored and want to do something.

well, drake certainly knows how to make himself at home. lol. that WAS weird behavior for a "suit" you'd think he would make servants do all the cooking and all that crappity crap that we have to do. anyways, u updateD! yes! and my finals are over! haha...so happy about that, im shouting it out to everyone and anyone. anywho, please update soON!

Its a very good story so far. Although, its kinda slow. The nutmeg part was very funny and Drake is a really interesting character. I also liked how you had Alora go to that fancy resturant with her boots and stained jacket. Anyways, its going somewhere, so good luck with the rest of it. ~ Wings

i like this story so far :) hope you update soon!

okay...add me to your list? If you haave one? Mailing list..? YeahLiking it so far. And whatnot.

The writing of this story is good. It's hard to find people who use proper grammer and actually spell-check their stories. However, I'm just wondering where this story is going. It's just kind of dragging along.

definitely keep trying, only nine more to go!

hehe finally caught up and reviewing for you! I should get special mention for this! I like Alora and Drake as a couple... they should get together! OH! He should be the college friend that Rose's husband knows! Dude, if I am right about this I will so laugh because that means we're thinking similarily like truw sisters! *squee!* I promise I will review promptly for chapter 7 and I will try hard not to slack on this again!