Reviews for Nutmeg aka Coffee Shop Story |
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![]() ![]() haha. Maybe you'll hit 10 this time! ) Well, it's a sooner or later thing. I've kinda been under the impression that Alora didn't have a car (up till now anyway). yeah, cause she's always without a ride and all. It's probably just lax reading on my part though. Thanks for updating! haha. We shall all hope hard that writer's block plagues you no more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont think im too fond of becoming a cannibalistic freak anytime soon. i dont think humans are that tasty anyways ~_ no drake in this chapter? ah fooey. guess that's more of an incentive to read the next chapter to get a glimpse of him. smart lol. anyways, please update soON! |
![]() ![]() i was getting worried about you!you hadnt updated in so long, i thought you forgot!that would have been horrid! but you didnt forget and youve finally updated, so im extremely happy. this chapter was nice. aloras mother is a lot nicer than she seemed to be at the beginning of the chapter. and yay for pagan shops! i just discovered one on mass street the other day and i thought it was fun, much. oy, if you ever come down to lawrence, we should hey, be sure to update your guardian story, now. i miss that story too. okies. ill talk/email/or something later. bye now. |
![]() ![]() hi. just dropping a review cos i enjoyed reading this story. your descriptions are accurate without being overpowering.. anyway, i like your character Alora.. she sounds like a sweet girl ;) |
![]() ![]() Thanks a lot for the dedication..that was sweet..But (I know you told it before!) Drake wasn't here!So I'm sad, yes, definitely!in my sick mind, I'm imagining he was some kind of geeky geek at school and he's catching up with eevrything right now (don't ask it was just the thing with Alora's mother wanting her to have a date that made me elaborate that!I'm crazy I know..)I've one more thing to say but I'll say it in the answer to your mail (I love having tons of mails don't know about you..)Anyway (I repeat myself but it's never too much it seems)GOD LUCK! (I've cried too much, voice is hoarse!)lou |
![]() ![]() ![]() ( where's chapter six? :cries: You dont love us reviewers anymore! :wails: |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! you have such a talent for writing; I think that your story is amazing. Alora amuses me to no end and the suit seems like a total sweetheart. Too bad Alora couldn't suddenly whip out tons of cash and wave it in the suit's face, and in return he could paint. haha. nonetheless their interactions together are just so fun to read. Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel like the host would've been even more polite in the beginning (referring to his dialogue of "what is this... girl of yours?"), as a host would be trained to be polite to anything. After all, if that had insulted his important customer's woman, he'd be in trouble! "Alora was sure he almost smiled saying that, but then again, she was also certain his face might crack if he did, or perhaps his perfect business mask would fall off and break. That would be a disaster." I love that line. I hope you're getting over your block! |
![]() ![]() I think we all put you in a good mood when you see "Review alert!" in your inbox. haha. I know I'm in a good mood when I see "Author Alert!" in mine. Which, by the way, is the reason why I'm not on your mailing list p Sweet suit! WHOOT. ) They're getting somewhere. Slowly but surely. hehh. Though I can see how she doesn't fit in and all. I say good touch with the "accidental" squeezing of the hand lotion bottle. haha. Go Alora! and yes, it was a DAMN bad pick-up line. If she really WAS the suit's sister, I don't think he'd have appreciated her being insulted. hmpf. lalala- The chapter was a nice read. And I'm most definitely looking forward to the next one ) |
![]() ![]() Argh! I love it i love it; I love the suit really and Alora (except for the little things with the so called ladies) seemed quite subdued! And Drake's name is Fearborn..just thought I would fall from my chair with laughter!Hope you're not having THAT much of a writer's block..(I'll be crying if you are)..Blessed be the nutmeg that gives you inspiration..I'll be thanking Starbucks forever..could you just put me on your mailing list?lou |
![]() ![]() great story! would love to read more! update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i almost had a heart attack when i read ur author's note cuz u said there might be some time passing between this chapter and the next on and then it said in the next sentence a couple of months (cept i forgot to read the other half which said "in alora's world" so i was basically freaking out. lol. anyways, i was wondering this last chapter too and i forgot to ask u..what IS nutmeg? i always thought it was this choclately kinda thing u put in sandwiches and then i read how you put it in coffee from a shaker or something and i got confused. anyways, thanks for the compliment..i was just looking for an obscure kinda name and it popped up so i thought "hey! why not?" anyways, loving this story. the suit, or drake, is sucha little weirdo. lol. anyways, please update sooN! |
![]() ![]() hehe now we'll aim for 10 reviews per chapter! _this story deserves it. |
![]() ![]() yay! chapter dedicated to me! i feel woow. he buys her dinner! thats so great! yay suit! is so easy to relate to alora. i love it. i absolutely love it. anyway. youve written another wonderful chapter. i hope you write that next one soon, like you said you would. bye 'til then, kiddie-o. happy writings. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story! keep updating. do love the suit! love the detail too... keep it up! |