Reviews for Nutmeg aka Coffee Shop Story |
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![]() ![]() You know I would have doen this sooner but you know why(dumb dog) But you did get five reviews without mine, that goods and you should be proud. Anyway, I love the runs in between Alora and "suit guy", there so cute. I know your writing the next chapter so I won't bug you about that! Can't wait till you get it up! ~LMD PS: I really like nutmeg now! lol |
![]() ![]() This is such an adorable story, I simply love it. It's so cute. I like the suit's inate charm and corporate cool. Nice mix. Keep up the good work:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh how strangers turn into acquaintences and then friends...well, we'll see about the friends part later on. i like this story, it's really cool. it's got a catchy aura to it that just grabs ur attention. great job with this chapter! drake sounds like the usual tall dark handsome egotistical and arrogant type of person. anyways,please update soON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe thanks!and i still love love love love it ! hehe 4 now, maybe that will make you update fasteryou write with such great detail and vivid words, I know it's worthwhile work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a good chapter, and not to long between updates, i like this story so plz dont give it up if u have the notion to do so, i await with eagerness ur next chapter |
![]() ![]() Read the story and loved it..really it's so cute and quite original:I never saw this in terms of 'suits' and 'artists' but it made me think truly..I hate when suits look down on you as if you were merely the scum of earth but fortunately there aren't all like that!Whatever..I love the obsession with nutmeg (life isn't that fun if you don't obsess over something..Though, i feel compelled to ask: are you obsessed with nutmeg (nothing wrong with that i think it's cool..)Hope you're going to update soon but anyway good luck with everythinglou |
![]() ![]() ![]() See, now you get two in a row! The suit really doesn't seem so bad. Though I'm really curious as to why he went up to bother her at all. Maybe he's a lonely fellow. aww. Also, he seems to be so.. against artists. Perhaps he has had a bad experience with them? haha. Didn't know you were an artist too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Opps, I didn't realise that I hadn't reviewed this chapter. Good thing you do your "replies to reviews" thing ) Insight as to her living conditions! Not the best I think. Her roomates seem.. unlikable. The poor girl! |
![]() ![]() yaay. the cute boy with icky-blond-female-attachment had shaggy hair!"a clay-dusted journal" [grins]. i actually miss those!that suit is a nice little person. hmm. hes twenty-eight? old! hes almost thirty. i dont like the age of thirty... but eh. well, its okay 'cause hes a great kid. AND hes an ambidextrious freak. sweet!so why was he gone for so long? |
![]() ![]() ![]() love love love this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story. I loved the bit with the suit grabbing the nutmeg from Alora. Update? ;) |
![]() ![]() i forgot to review that last chapter earlier. thats horrid. sorry bout . this was another great chapter. lol. made me laugh. that suit is quite a funny kid. and the bit about having perpetually dry hands made me smile. her apartment seems a bit poo. oh the perks of being a collge student!oh dude, i was at school today.. with libby.. at aroud one in the afternoon. didnt stay for more than fifteen minutes, everyone was teaching [oh. of all the crazy things to do at a highschool!]. okies. gots to read other stories. you better update this story soon. bye 'til then. |
![]() ![]() To shoot you or not to, that is the queation, I guess I'll give you a break this time! While I guess I really shouldn't complain, since I did get a sneak peek, but still. Maybe I should send you weekly reminders to update! Keep on writing b/c I love this story. Do you want me to start begging 2 certain people to review your story, that way a certain pretty number will go up?LMDPS:Fun with nutmeg |
![]() ![]() hm very interesting...i like! |
![]() ![]() ![]() In chapter 3, I went from hating the "suit" to actually linking him. This story is very well written. I like the way that everything is being revealed slowly instead of all at once. |