Reviews for Nutmeg aka Coffee Shop Story |
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![]() ![]() hey there, good chap, could be better if there's more interaction with Drake and Alora. update soon! |
![]() ![]() AH..so glad Alora decided to get over herself and date Drake! I would have thought the SCENE (do I need to say which?) would be a bit more awkward but I very much liked it!Can Ryan and Ben be any crazier ? I agree with Kendra and Alora: I don't know how anyone can't stand them for very long even if they're so adorably goofy! Any clue on what you're working on now? (since you mentioned starting something else..) |
![]() ![]() Ah, those two are so cute together The scene with the "toy boys" was so evil... Can't wait for the next chap, but take your time. Don't want this story to end TT_TT Sequel, pretty please? *puppydogeyes* Love, Pan |
![]() ![]() *chanting* SE-QUEL! SE-QUEL! SE-QUEL! SE-QUEL! COME ON! DX You HAVE to show their first official 'date' and then when they get it on and get married and have babies, and Molly Ringwald, with the Dress and the beauty of life! XD (GR! DX I am unhappy that this has ended after five years, but at the same time I'm happy that it had a conclusion! _ At least we know they both wanted to date each other. .; ) Hee! Overall, GOOD JOB, LADY! D ... I still wish we'd also gotten to see Alora meet his family, and find out about the brother. _ ; I seriously think whatever happened to his brother should have played into the story. .; |
![]() ![]() ![]() there's still a couple of more chapters to go right? I loved this chapter. But, when Alora talked to Drake about going out or whatever, you made it sound so formal. But it was still great. Please update soon, because I really want to see their date! |
![]() ![]() Please, please, please have more than one more chapter. The story must go one just a wee bit longer. :) Anyway... my favorite part is when the old lady refused (politely) to sell Alora's artwork. It's clever little twists like that that make this story uniquely awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is about time Alora admits her feelings! Now, you have to have Drake admit his, too, before it gets too late, you know? Anyway, amazing story as always. I was happy that I took time off my play to check it out. I'd write more, but my teacher might go balistic. Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story your writing is quite good i just found it today however there are several inconsistencies when he is telling Alora about his family they are in separate chapters though overall the writing is quite good |
![]() ![]() second to last, no! please say it isn't so. well i'm just glad that her eyes are begining to open. |
![]() ![]() hey there, nice work. My fav parts would be the scene in the elevator where it show Drake's getting quite comfortable being in Alora personal space or the moves he makes on her are getting less controlled. Another fav is the slow smile scene back at his house. No least fav so far... update soon! |
![]() ![]() I didn't know artists loved Stargate xD. Keep up the good work, mate. I love the story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter. Yay! Alora finally realized that she likes Drake. Well their 'relationship' is at least going somewhere. This chapter was really really good. Your writing was amazing, and I am so excited because they can finally get together. PLEASE update soon. |
![]() ![]() This? This was sexy! X3 (Okay, it was adorable! X3) I'm still hardcore rooting for these two to get together at least by the last chapter. It'd be fun to imagine those two trying to live together. XD Especially since he's going to be living with his mother... I'd love to see Alora meeting his mother. That's a definite one... dear god, what if his mother hated her for not being a nice NORWEGIAN girl or something of that sort? D |
![]() ![]() Hello there Dragen Eyez, Just wanna to tell you how happy I am that this story is not dead. I came around this story back in late 07 or 08 can't remember...but back then it didn't seem like you were gonna continue with nutmeg and i was so disappointed. But i'm so HAPPY now that ur gonna finish it. :D Anyways, i was just wondering if i can join your mailing list because i'm really interested in reading the novel your are working on. Hope to hear from you soon, daydreamer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sometimes I forget just how old Drake actually is. The whole suit thing makes him seem older, but when you have him laughing at Alora and being amused by her silly antics, I remember that he isn't exactly 'old.' My favorite part of this story had to be when they were reminiscing how they met. I like incooperated that into the story, especially since it has been 34 chapters since the chapter where they met. They really did hate each other, huh? Lol. I hated Drake in the beginning, but now, I'm absolutely in love with him. If Alora doesn't want him, I'll take him, lol. The whole nutmeg thing was hilarious, though. I don't think I ever said that in my reviews of the earlier chapters. Anyway, amazing chapter, as always. Can't wait for the final three. |