Good chapter, lots of Drake and Alora. There's only three chapters left? no! And you HAVE to write the sequel. And yes, I'm interested in your new novel.

you know when i check my favs to see who has updated, i always read this story last. you wanna know why? 'cause you save the best for last. just saying thanks.

Gr! It's been thirty five chapters with three more to the end, and Alora and Drake are STILL not a couple!

They truly wind up just very good friends? XD

'Cause it's looking exactly like that! XD

Also, I would totally be willing to read your story! X3

(Hell, I once drew 'fan art' (lol) of Alora and Drake... but it's been so long that I can't remember where I might have put it. ._.; Boo. DX )

I am also willing to edit the story for you, but it'd require a lot of back and forth. XD

Su... XD

Yeah..

Again, totally willing to read the story you mentioned in this chapter! D I believe you k now my email,a nd if not? Wel, FictionPRess is useful like that, isn't it? XD

Hope to see more, because I was so hoping for these two to get together, yeah yeah yeah.. *singing the melody for that one song from the original Parent Trap movie*

XD

yay! Drake didnt like his date with Sarah! When I read it, I started smiling. You should make Alora go on a date with the guy from the phone, and then once she is on the date, you should make her compare him to Drake. And then she will realize no guy could compare to him :D But this was a very good chapter. I also loved your writing. I love that Drake stayed and made her breakfast. That was really cute. Please update soon :D

I love your chapters always but I feel kind of sad that there isn't anything happening between the two of them at the moment.

I'm curious... Is there something to look forward to in the next chapter?

Definitely not too long! I always look forward to reading the new chapters because there's always a good character, or insight, or dialogue going on; so the longer, the better, in my opinion. :) I just love Drake and Alora together. And I love when he calls her Muskat!

BRILLIANT! As always.(And let me tell ya, it's about time. I check this like every day just for your update, lol)

I have so many things to say, but so little time.

Let me start with Eliza. I love her... I don't know.. I just love her attitude and all that good stuff. She is kind of suitish, but not really, because she doesn't act all stuck up and she is into art. I like that.

From what I read about Liz, she seems pretty chill.

I hope we get to know her better in the next four chapters, or maybe we won't.

I'm still hanging on the edge of my seat, just wondering WHEN you will finally make Alora admit her feelings for Drake and him admit his.

It is just so obvious that there is something OTHER than FRIENDSHIP between them.

I mean, come on, someone would have to be stupid not to see that.

Then there is Sarah. Ugh, stupid girl. I wish she wouldn't have

asked Drake out. But I like how it adds a little drama and how Alora is jealous, though you never actually say it...you can still tell that she is jealous, especially when she says that she hopes that she gets to try out the new restaurant with Drake and not Sarah...

That shows a hint of jealousy.

I like how your brought Will-whats-his-face into the story again. He really is annoying. I'd like to kick the stuck up jerk where the sun don't shine, if you get what I'm saying.

I think my favorite part of this whole story was the part where Drake saved her from Will(I'm gonna call him that. It's easier.) I just thought his saving her like she was some kind of damsel in distress was the cutest thing ever and I love how he lied about Sarah having to leave earlier. He totally did it for Alora, because he loves her, hello. I think everyone who reads this story is rooting for Drake and Alora.

They are destined, simple as that.

They have to be my favorite couple(even though they aren't a couple, aha) in fanfiction history. I just love their attitudes towards life and I just love them.

Nice work, as always.

Can't wait for the last chapters.

The answers to the questions that the lovely author wrote at the bottom of this page are "excellent, heck yeah, not long enough, aww... it's so sweet." I particularly like this story, and I'm not entirely sure why. I would like to see it edited and published and printed on recycled paper with a stylized coffee mug on the cover (or a cafe scene) you can end chapters with little pictures of coffee mugs. I would totally buy that book. This would also make a nice indie film because it is full of wonderfully strange people. In summary "w00t! Gr8 story, upd8 soon. :D "

wow. that was amazing. i cant believe that Drake is going to go out with Sarah. That's just mean. But it's great that alora is bothered by it. I also love Eliza and what she said about Alora and Drake. Excellent writing, as always. The length of the chapter was perfect and keep updating!

You say 'it's too long!' like it should be upsetting!

I thought it was absolutely wonderful!

I loved the 'extra screen time' if you will. XD

I loved the two trying to sleep at Alora's apartment. It's certainly the first time for Drake, and after Alora's been over to his how many times and slept over how many times? (I think at least twice, right? I don't even properly remember what the second time was about! D)

It was about time he tried sleeping over!

Those two handle each other so well! -

I hope his date with Sarah stinks. ._.

Now then, as always I eagerly await the next chapter but am happy that this came out when it did. XD I was beginning to wonder when it'd come out. XD

I should really be practicing singing and playing the chords to a silly Christian song a friend wanted me to learn in less than two days so that I could help him perform it in a make shift band... I keep hoping he tells me not to go, that he's doing something else. I hate singing in front of a large group of people. It scares the crap out of me...

plus, I always somehow manage to get sick just before I have to sing, which means my singing is never at it's absolute best. ._.;

*sigh*

Wish me luck, and I know you'll ace that MCAT!

Doctor Muskat, at our service? That will be SEXY! XD

you'ld better put up the next chapter real quick, 'cause this slow torture is killing me.

btw, love this story. publish it.

AMIGO! *tackle hugs* I'm going crazy wanting to see how the ball turns out, but I have to admit!

I LOVED THE DATE! o! XD

(Isn't this the kind of thing that embarasses the crap out of friends? Geeze, I hope that something doesn't happen... something like: "Boyfriend! D" "I'MNOTYOURBOYFRIEND! DX *run away screaming*"

Neither with Drake being the former nor Alora... _ )

I am curious about something though... I thought that Drake used to open the car door for her in the past anyway? That behavior shouldn't be totally new to her... _ ;

Unless it had been a while since he had done that for her? _

I just had to check and see if you updated.

You didn't think I forgot about this story, did you?

Aha, that would be like completely impossible.

I have to say, that out of all the stories I've read on BOTH fictionpress AND fanfiction, yours is by far my favorite.

Just something about the way you make the characters seem so real

and not to mention believable makes me love your writing.

If this ever becomes a book and you decide to turn it into a publisher, I will most definitely buy it... like a million copies, lol.

I'm seriously excited for 34. I can't wait to see what you do with Alora and Drake next.

Ehe, he loves sweet tarts. They are AMAZING.

Gosh, I love Drake, as I've sad a gagillion times before.

ANYWHO, keep writing. Because it's amazing. :P

this is such a good chapter. your writing is incredible! I love the part where they went to the movies together, and it was soo cute when he complimented her. Have you written the ending of this story yet?

I remember this quote from chapter 23: "“Better marry a CEO.” Her father shook his head, but he was only half-joking."

Was there some foreshadowing back then? Hehe :D