Reviews for Nutmeg aka Coffee Shop Story
obsolete9838 chapter 32 . 4/8/2009
I just read all 32 chapters of your story; it was that addicting.

I really enjoyed your characters and how the interaction is so flawless. You really have a gift for characterization and expressing things. Normally, I don't really like stories that don't have an interesting/strong plot (not that your story isn't interesting, because it is) but Alora and especially Drake just won me over. They just have this life that really "leaps off the page" - sorry for the cliche, but it's apt.

And also, this is just on the side and probably because I read the story in one sitting, but you have a couple of inconsistencies. The ones that stood out were Drake talking about his family (it seems as though Alora doesn't know about his family after he's told her the basics) and Alora talking about her debutante ball to Drake in the last few chapters.

Other than that, which I'm sure is just due to forgetting you mentioned things already, Nutmeg is a great and promising story. I want to thank you for writing such a captivating story - especially one that doesn't rush on the romance!
anon chapter 32 . 4/5/2009
I love you. Your story makes me smile and drink coffee. out of five stars I give it five stars and a :) because it is just that awesome, also I love your characters they are so very human, and on the subject of Goblin King With Freckles, I agree, it's a tragedy, I may spend the rest of my life wondering what could have been... but you wouldn't do that would you? Please never abandon this story. Yeah... eventually I may go back and try to write more intelligent things in reviews, but for now I summarize my opinion with "Yay!" Thus ends my awkward/creepy/stalker/complementy review.
anon chapter 6 . 4/5/2009
Your addictive story is now officially to blame for my incomplete studies. That is a complement.
fire0ice chapter 32 . 4/4/2009
love as always. thanks
born backwards chapter 32 . 4/4/2009
I love the ending..

"No. No counting."

Ehe, it is pretty hilarious. I just absolutely love Drake and as soon as I got home from Marshall University..I just HAD to check up on your story and see if you had updated. Luckily, you did. Aha, that brightened my day, because I was all bummed to be back home and not still having fun with a bunch of drama geeks(who i love to death.) But this was just absolutely amazing and I can't wait until the next chapter. I still think Drake and Alora belong together...
Fayes Love chapter 32 . 4/3/2009
I loved that ending. XD "No. No counting." XD

Why gotta cut her off like that, man? XD

This is what I think about Drake.. but I also though it was hilarious.

They're being exceptionally cute in this chapter!

I wonder if Drake's feeling that lag from all the travelling? The moment of truth is coming! That ball, that ball!

I'm waiting for the fireworks to fly that evening and for SOMETHING to happen between those two! X3

I WONDER WHAT WILL HAPPEN! D X3

He has successfully taught her to dance... THE WALTZ. I wonder what other dances he will teach her, BWUAHAHAHH! XD

Speaking of parties, I need to finish up my chores. I've only got the one left over, but I've been organizing and cleaning things most of this morning. I did play Guitar Hero on my PS2 for about two, maybe three hours first... but then, I've been awake since about seven thirty AM this morning. ._.

Even so, of course I would take time out of this busy day to read your awesome story.

You know, I keep fearing that you'll delete Nutmeg? It got to the point where I considered copy/saving everything to edit what I could and give it back to you. XD

There are some things in there where I'm not sure if it was intentional or if it was a mistake, and if it was a mistake, I wouldn't know what you intended. You have a mistake like that in this chapter, actually... I think. _;

It was just something like "You have to keep talking to keep yourself from talking"?

I think you meant 'to keep yourself from counting" but I can't be one hundred percent positive of that, right? XD Being that I'm not the author... Hee hee! X3

I love that Ryan found a hot, HAWT date, because everyone deserves a chance at love. X3

I'll stop bothering you now. ._.;
twinerd chapter 32 . 4/3/2009
awsome job with this chapter. Are you almost done with the story? I keep on thinking that Drake and Alora are going to be a couple, but their relationship is not progressing that fast. It kind of makes me think twice if they will only be friends. I think your story is amazing and you should update faster!
M.F. Hawthorne chapter 15 . 4/2/2009
Love the formal secretary, by the way.
M.F. Hawthorne chapter 32 . 4/2/2009
Just finished reading all the chapters. Great job! I love the awkwardness that still resonates between them sometimes-but it's just started to dissolve. Keep up the good work!
M.F. Hawthorne chapter 5 . 4/2/2009
"An experience in hell…" Alora pondered that for a moment. "How wonderful."

"Some like the weather there."

I love the banter! Can't wait to keep reading.
M.F. Hawthorne chapter 4 . 4/2/2009
I love Drake's matter-of-fact answers. Such pretension! It's sexy!
M.F. Hawthorne chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
Chapter 1 is great. Really low key and yet makes me want Alora to stick it to the suit again. Good job!
Fayes Love chapter 31 . 3/29/2009
Matt gets his girl, Alora is probably going to be formally asked out or be made severely uncomfortable during that charity ball... and I wonder if at some point her grandfather will tell her to break off her friendship with Drake?

Forcing her to choose between her family (okay, her grandparents, who have only ever hurt her feelings and tried to make her feel like less of a person due to her personality) and a dear friend who has been there for her when she needed somebody to care the most for her will not seem an easy choice initially...

but to eventually lose a friend and first your family...

... It's happened... _;

It's believable... _

... Unless I go with my child-like thoughts. XD

They're gonna be together (end everything like a question, okay? XD)!

And their wedding's gonna have ponies!

And penguins!

and ponies!

And polar bears!

and ponies!

XD

Basically, I keep hoping that Alora and Drake will get around to becoming a fairly healthy couple, and that her grandparents will back the f*ck off instead of trying to control Alora's relationship with him or exploit it somehow.
born backwards chapter 31 . 3/28/2009
The ending of that made me giggle. The whole thing made me giggle actually.

Now, I'm excited for the last seven chapters.

But I'm sad to be finished with these 31 chapters.

But it was amazing.

I loved it and can't wait to read the rest.

I promise to not lose track when you update. I'm a loyal reader when I want to be. x'D

And in this case, I want to be.
born backwards chapter 30 . 3/28/2009
Definitely enough artist-suit interaction.

The connection was even more amazing in this one.

I loved it when she said something about showing up in her birthday suit. His reaction was priceless.

I'm going to read chapter 31. I can't believe it's the last one I can read until you post more.

I'll be like checking every single day for that new chapter. x'D
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