Reviews for Nutmeg aka Coffee Shop Story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Two more chapters left for me. I think I might cry that I won't have any to read after that. Your story consumed most of my day today. FINALLY, they are making a romantic connection on some level. He so likes her, why else would he pass up Renee for Alora? I can't wait to read the last two. I'm bouncing impatiently. I need to read now, so I'm going to stop reviewing this chapter now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Ryan. I realized I haven't said a thing about him. He cracks me up and I love Ben, too. They are a little 'out there', but I would totally go for Ben.. well, actually, my friend would go for Ben. She's a total red-head freak. I'm more of a fan of guys with messy dirty blonde hair or some brunette, sexy hair with green eyes or deep blue eyes. I'm so picky that it's not even funny. Anyway, enough about that. I can't believe I'm almost finished reading this. And it is only my second day. WOO. Oh well. Aha, I do read fast after all. I got Twilight on Christmas morning and finished it around eight thirty Christmas night. Of course I take breaks inbetween, though, but I found it hard to put it down. I have a very unhealthy obsession with vampires and fantasy creatures. I'm rambling again. Anyway, I'm going to finish the last three chapters and I can't wait until the last seven are posted. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They should have danced. It would have been cute. I keep loving the suit more and more. I still love Alora's attitude towards life. I like Kat, too, but Renee better keep away from the suit, aha because I want him with Alora, as I'm sure many other readers may have I said before. I was more than a little late in discovering this story, but boy am I glad that I did. x'D It's absolutely my favorite and I've decided to add it my favorites, which I should have done earlier. I may read some of your other stories as well. Your style of writing intrigues me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() FINALLY, they're talking again. I was DYING here. I can't picture him and jeans in a t-shirt, but I bet he looks totally sexy(as always) and even younger than she decscribes him in this one. Seriously, you're going to make it impossible for me to fall in love because I'll be looking for a Drake in every cafe I go to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Really? Is she hot?” “Oh yeah…” She waited until she heard Matt’s exclamation. “He’s hot all right.” “…He?” “Ryan’s gay.” She continued. “But he’s willing to go out with you even though you’re straight. So next Friday at eight, you have a date!” “You didn’t.” “Can’t I play matchmaker? Ryan’s so sweet!” “No. I’m disowning you.” I was laughing so hard at that. Just like a sister to do that to her brother. I may do that to my little brother one of these days. It would be so hilarious. I want her to make up with the suit. It kills me when they aren't talking to each other, just because their relationship is just so interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alora shouldn't have been so mean to Drake, but then again, he shouldn't have ignored her. Their relationship is strange. I don't understand it, but I like it. Like Kara DioGuardi once said, it leaves me confused but happy. x'D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that she got so offended by Drake ignoring her. My friends ignore me all the time and I don't get THAT offended. She totally has a thing for him.. I don't care if saying that makes me sound crazy. It's true. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Alora. I hate Xander. I knew he was going to be a horrible guy even if I loved him in the beginning. Bad boys always turn out to be just that-well not always, but most of the time. I cannot believe he slapped her. I love Drake and I love how he is so worried about Alora. Still, I can't tell if it is because he is falling for her or if it is because he thinks of her as a child that he needs to care for. He is very confusing and hard to figure out. I'd be frustrated if I knew a guy like him. I hate not knowing what my friends are thinking. It drives me insane. I have to admit. I was glad you FINALLY told us what his hair looks like down. I've been waiting forever to picture him with his hair down. He sounds even sexier than he does when you describe him with a braid. But then again, I thought he sounded sexy when you first described him in the story. I went from hating to loving Drake and I went from loving to hating Xander. Your story is making me bi-polar, but oh well. I need to shut up so I can read chapter 23. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eek, I love her dad. I want him as a father, considering I don't really know what it is like to have one. For crying out loud, I freaking love Drake. If Alora doesn't want him, i'll take him for myself. He's just so sweet and cute and he wasn't wearing a tie? That's a first. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alora's mother is not nice. I have a few colorful words to describe her character but will refrain from using them. She's such a snob and totally stuck up. No wonder the world doesn't like most rich people. Some can be plain rude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Xander and Alora are just so cute. Drake is being too quiet- I keep waiting for him to talk, but that just kind of sit there. I'm going to miss him being in the story for however long you will have him gone. He's sincerly one of my most favorite characters. I shall continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Divorce is a scary thing. My parents divorced when I was seven or something, but I wasn't necessarily upset about that for reasons I can't discuss. Anyhow.. I don't understand the suit sometimes. His whole persona confuses the hell out of me, but you make his character so gosh darn loveable. It is frustrating, aha, but I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good mood... bad mood. Is Drake bi-polar? Aha, kidding, but he seriously has a lot of mood changes. Then again, who doesn't? I'm almost sad that I'm almost finished. I may have to read this story again once I reach chapter 31, that is until there's a new chapter- if there is one that is. Ugh, stupid parties. I would rather die than attend a party where I'd have to eat fish eggs. Poor Matt, Poor Alora. That Willibard or whatever his name is, is weird. I don't like him, aha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor suit. I want to give him a hug.. he seems to be nothing but sad lately. It really is depressing. But of course, I shall continue. How could I not? That's a rhetorical question, by the way. :) I love how Alora is so protective of her brother, it is sweet. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, I'd be impatient, too, if someone were trying to paint me. I have to move. Sitting still is not for me, so I sympathize with Xander... I almost called him Drake, lol. I'm getting the boys confused, but oh well, they're all amazing, so it doesn't matter. |