Honestly, this story is great and written beautifully without any grammatical errors. (Thank god!) I loved reading this original story and read all the chapters within 24 hours. Hopefully, this story will be picked up again and updated soon because I want to know more about what will happen in the future with Haruki and the band (((:

The first chapter was great. It really draws you in. Even though there are a few grammar mistakes, it doesn't take away from the story.

Wow i love it, really looking forward to more and how her relationships among the band progress, espesially now we r seeing more of ryou :3

Love the revamp! It's been years since I've last been on here and I've been enjoying this new version. :) Can't wait to see what happens next.

"But for crying out loud quit murdering your goddamn cake!" Amazing quote. XD
Haruki's nervousness is really relatable D:
But I love that the band-mates tell her to just play for herself. :)
I was so happy when they were signed! :'D
I'm hoping she doesn't leave the group though, but I feel for both characters. :/ I'm a lot like her. So I probably would have done the exact same...

I like the expressionless guy in the audience. It seems like such a small detail but true to life. :)
I'm glad they made it but I have a feeling trouble is going to come soon. XD
...And there we have it. The bad news... And wow. That's actually really heartbreaking. But again true to life. :( You usually fail before you succeed right? :P

Incredible chapter. :)
It seems the band members are getting closer together. Also I find Yuuichi a really interesting character. How he's like one of the band members but also so different at work. :D
I think he might be my favorite character.

Lol! I love how her and Yuuichi are talking about cake in the beginning. I'm reminded of L. XD
Love how you described her playing the guitar for the first time too. o.o
You have a way of describing real life events really well! Like it's just her playing the guitar, but you describe it in such a way without giving it too much extra information. I'm impressed. :)
If you have a chance, I'd love to talk to you through PM.

Her cousin seems like quite the character. XD
I can relate a lot to Haruki. Me and my sister used to both draw a lot. Now she's a really talented artist, but I just do it as a hobby and I'm not nearly as good :P

I'm curious. :)

SOBBING. I love this story wholeheartedly.

I have been following this story for quite some time and I am always anxiously waiting for the next piece. I loved how it was originally and I'm very pleased with the re-releases.

I noticed, even though characters were introduced this chapter, they didn't get much description, not saying describe every little thing, but a sentence with eye color and hair color would be helpful. That being said, I wouldn't mind more details in the prose overall, just more body language hints and what not.

The idea of a bad manga, honestly the are rather rare, fare rarer than one might thing. So it's nice to see some variety

Iv'e been following this story since the very first draft. I'm afraid to fall in love with it in case you start over again but its coming out amazing so far. Can't wait until the next chapter...actually I just can't wait until we see more of Ryou and Haruki again.

Okay, so you HAVE to update...like fast because this story of yours is just way too awesome to be left un-updated! I wonder who Haruki is going to end up with? Initially, I thought that it would be Kei and her (you made me fall for Kei when you described him the first time), but Ryou and Haruki sound pretty cute too! Man, you make me wish that they're an actual band...that was a compliment by the way :D I feel like there's going to be some drama happening between Kei and Shin once the Kei/Suzume thingy is revealed to Shin...and of course, Haruki's going to get dragged in. Please, please, please, pretty please update this spectacular story! You just got a fan :D