Reviews for BLACK CHERRY
who cares4 chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
wow the update verison so RULES! rox mi bunni socks! upates are LOVED bi ME!
Red Angel777 chapter 1 . 11/10/2004
This is great! I like this one better then the old one, don't know why though. Keep up the good work!
Aharah Musici chapter 3 . 11/9/2004
I like this revised version much better, good jobwith it!
YumeNeko chapter 3 . 11/6/2004
Pure bliss! I love how this story's going! Keep it up _
YumeNeko chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Whoohoo! You're god! Love this story... I enjoy watching Shin-chan!
He's sort of like a grown-up crayon Shin-chan _
Keep it up!
juu-san chapter 3 . 11/4/2004
Wow! That was quick! Anyway, that was another good chapter.
Good luck with the next chapter!
juu-san chapter 2 . 11/3/2004
I like this version better than the last one. Hitom's clothes also seem more casual than the ones she wore in the last version.
:thumbs up: Good luck with the next chapter!
samizdat chapter 2 . 11/1/2004
this is much better that teh first one..keep it up. lolz_
A. Pikachu chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
i just saw your bio, and i was amazed that this was written by someone who's close to my age. I must say that you are amazing.
A. Pikachu
P.S: I'm in the same location where you are.
A. Pikachu chapter 2 . 10/30/2004
I find this entertaining, and I hope you can continue. I'm amazed by your knowledge of Tokyo. I assume you've lived there?
Looking forward to more of your work,
A. Pikachu
Kitsune-tejina chapter 2 . 10/29/2004
That was great! Hahahahaha! I don't get why Shin-chan is funny though... huh.
ro0kiE chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
nice chapter! i like reading this story when it was still under parody and until one day i found out it's not there anymore. I thought it was accidentally remove or something. I was a bit surprised that you moved it under romance and changed the plot. I really like the former storyline though i don't know where it's heading and i think i will like this too.. nice job for the first chapter. :D
Kitsune-tejina chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
What happened to the original? Oh well, I guess we'll all have to be patient to see this story go up and running. Seems good so far! Br very, very pervy cousin. Cheers!
Aharah Musici chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
What prompted the edit? Anywho I really like the edit better than the origonal (so far)
claw merryweather chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
I like the story already! ;D AND VISUAL KEI. XD
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