Reviews for BLACK CHERRY |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow the update verison so RULES! rox mi bunni socks! upates are LOVED bi ME! peace |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is great! I like this one better then the old one, don't know why though. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this revised version much better, good jobwith it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pure bliss! I love how this story's going! Keep it up _ ~Ichigo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoohoo! You're god! Love this story... I enjoy watching Shin-chan! He's sort of like a grown-up crayon Shin-chan _ Keep it up! ~Ichigo |
![]() ![]() Wow! That was quick! Anyway, that was another good chapter. Good luck with the next chapter! juu |
![]() ![]() I like this version better than the last one. Hitom's clothes also seem more casual than the ones she wore in the last version. :thumbs up: Good luck with the next chapter! juu |
![]() ![]() this is much better that teh first one..keep it up. lolz_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just saw your bio, and i was amazed that this was written by someone who's close to my age. I must say that you are amazing. A. Pikachu P.S: I'm in the same location where you are. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find this entertaining, and I hope you can continue. I'm amazed by your knowledge of Tokyo. I assume you've lived there? Looking forward to more of your work, A. Pikachu |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great! Hahahahaha! I don't get why Shin-chan is funny though... huh. |
![]() ![]() nice chapter! i like reading this story when it was still under parody and until one day i found out it's not there anymore. I thought it was accidentally remove or something. I was a bit surprised that you moved it under romance and changed the plot. I really like the former storyline though i don't know where it's heading and i think i will like this too.. nice job for the first chapter. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() What happened to the original? Oh well, I guess we'll all have to be patient to see this story go up and running. Seems good so far! Br very, very pervy cousin. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() What prompted the edit? Anywho I really like the edit better than the origonal (so far) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story already! ;D AND VISUAL KEI. XD |