|Reviews for What's Wrong With Me?|
| Oringinal Lolly chapter 1 . 8/12/2005
LOL! that is my life in words!
GREAT job! keep up the awesome work!
| Charisma101 chapter 1 . 11/4/2004
Interesting, really is. You realy show the confusion the text contains as well as the one in denial of the whole ordeal. Intersting funny piece, love it!
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
That was so true! I mean I have felt that way too, you can tell from the poetry that I exaggerate A LOT! I don't always do it intentionally, but that how it appears to be. Who hasn't question their sanity? I can really relate to it. Poignant poem!
| My-BleedingPen98 chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
i like it. very true.
| Qu33n of Spades chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
If it makes you feel any better, I do that too. It doesn't mean there's anything wrong with you, more like... I dunno. I know with me it's because I'm a tad bit too dramatic... I think... ANYWAY... this is great, I love it. It's so easy to relate to.
I enjoy reading what you write, you're so very down-to-earth. Keep it up, man! Whoo!
| u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
Ah this is great, the emotion is perfect. I often feel like that too, but in reality nothing is really that wrong.
I really like this bit:
" The life long story of
The mediocre madness
Always brings me down."
Well done, i'm adding you to my faves:D
| Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
You couldn't of erxpressed the feeling better! Amazing emotion...It didn't flow to well at the end but the message was amazing.
| Rosetifer chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
I really like this one...I can relate. I like the "The life long story of-exaggerated sadness-the mediocre madness." keep it up.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
nothings wrong with ya. maybe its just the feeling of the day? aw poor you *hugs hugs hugs* yeah... cool writing though, gotta give it that! yeah, post more stuff now?
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
you basically described me in that poem.. I dont know what the fuck is wrong with me or you, but at least your not the only one! I like the format and the rhymign I love hte phrase "mediocre madness"