|Reviews for Lies There Still|
| Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
marvellous! my favorite of what i've read of your work so far, it takes mammoth tales of human suffering to make me cry for them... merely allude to an animal being hurt and i'm in buckets!
| lyrabird chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
i can really tell this was written last year, the style is the same AND I LOVE THIS STYLE. ITS AWESOME. TEACH ME HOW TO WRITE LIKE THIS. ice queen was awesome, so is this one. you rockps dieing is dying, but im sure that was just a
| Twisted Shadows chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
All your poems flow so well - how you get this rhythm is beyond me! The rhyming is nice, and again it's short and sweet. Poor ickle animals!
Just a note: "dieing" should be "dying". :)
The first two verses are really powerful imagery. I love the phrase "velvet night". [steals it] Heheheh.
Again, Favourite Stories.
~ Twisted Shadows
| RinaJewelz chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
I think this was nicely written. Love the description at the beggining. And i like the last two verses also. Flows really well.