Reviews for Ice Queen
Sweet Songs of Surrender chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
georgeous, i love it, the imagery is beautiful
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
Very simple. But the imagery is good.
cassie chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
i actually read this before but didn't review it and i shall say exactly what i think:i think it is marvellousi love the formati love the short lines (if i remember it was the style of the time last year - i remember other ppl writing poems like that)i love the subject of the ice queeni loved the words (have i said that)sum of all that I LOVED IT! and i think you should teach me to write like that. love cassie
Twisted Shadows chapter 1 . 10/18/2005

I'm amazed that you got it all to rhyme - that can be very difficult! The way the words fit is like they are made for this poem. I like the rhythmn of the piece, the sort of running chugga-chugging as she read it.

The idea behind it is lovely too. I can just imagine this white-clad woman sitting upon the clouds, crying her lament to the world and changing the landscape whilst she does it. The short words are just that - short and sweet, and they help keep the rhythm of the piece going.

What else can I say? I love it. Favourite stories list you are on, for sure.

~ Twisted Shadows
SliversofSilverPain chapter 1 . 6/12/2005
That's beautiful; the poem drifts slowly like snowflakes towards its end. I love it!
pentuprage chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
That was excellent! Short lines, yet very descriptive. Keep on writing!
A walk in the woods chapter 1 . 10/23/2004
Oh wow! I love that! That is too cool!