Reviews for Unexpectations
HalfwayParanoid chapter 13 . 11/19/2012
This was really good, I enjoyed every bit of it.
A few mistakes with spacing here and there, but all around good.
An chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
there's no such word as unexpectations. i just thought i'd let you know cause it sounds blah.
JustWords chapter 13 . 6/29/2010
awesome story! ;)
Jasmen111 chapter 12 . 5/16/2010
loved this story. awesome
Unrememorable chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
This is such cute story, I can't help but love it! A thousand Miles is one of my all time favorite songs too so yay!
3DarkGoddess3 chapter 12 . 2/17/2009
Great story. I felt bad for Jake though.
bookwormhottie chapter 11 . 1/15/2009
good story
sooo chapter 6 . 11/25/2008
this story happens too fast.
Rose chapter 14 . 10/23/2008
aww that was really sweet! nice story really liked it. But you might've ended it a bit abruptly? Or maybe I'm just used to reading really long stories. But a very cute lighthearted story! Liked the plot and characters! What about Jack?
pandorka42 chapter 12 . 9/7/2008
E! That was marvelous! I very much enjoyed the read. :)

Two thumbs up, indeed.
WithoutException chapter 4 . 8/5/2008
Good job. I especially like the name Elissa. It's cool. You have quite a few grammar mistakes in here, might want to consider getting a beta. It's kind of hard to understand at times. Also, the characters seem over-dramatic and unrealistic at times - like "Oh MY Gawd KEVIN I HATE YOU!" seems a bit of an over-reaction for his comment about the pants. And some how I can't picture Jack saying "Omg Kevin!"

But this really does have potential. I'm a sucker for stories about tomboys, even though I'm not actually one myself. Wonder why...
Zephrie chapter 8 . 3/3/2008
A cliche i love. chapter 12 . 11/1/2007
That is really good please make a sequel to it, it's amazing. I wish/hope that you make a sequel and if you have, WOOTWOOT!
DELPROF chapter 12 . 7/15/2007
OH MY GAWSH! That was really good. I hope you make a sequel.

Hugs and Smiles,

DELPROF chapter 4 . 7/15/2007
i love it.

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