This was really good, I enjoyed every bit of it.
A few mistakes with spacing here and there, but all around good.

there's no such word as unexpectations. i just thought i'd let you know cause it sounds blah.

awesome story! ;)

loved this story. awesome

This is such cute story, I can't help but love it! A thousand Miles is one of my all time favorite songs too so yay!

Great story. I felt bad for Jake though.

good story

this story happens too fast.

aww that was really sweet! nice story really liked it. But you might've ended it a bit abruptly? Or maybe I'm just used to reading really long stories. But a very cute lighthearted story! Liked the plot and characters! What about Jack?

E! That was marvelous! I very much enjoyed the read. :)

Two thumbs up, indeed.

Good job. I especially like the name Elissa. It's cool. You have quite a few grammar mistakes in here, might want to consider getting a beta. It's kind of hard to understand at times. Also, the characters seem over-dramatic and unrealistic at times - like "Oh MY Gawd KEVIN I HATE YOU!" seems a bit of an over-reaction for his comment about the pants. And some how I can't picture Jack saying "Omg Kevin!"

But this really does have potential. I'm a sucker for stories about tomboys, even though I'm not actually one myself. Wonder why...

A cliche i love.

That is really good please make a sequel to it, it's amazing. I wish/hope that you make a sequel and if you have, WOOTWOOT!

OH MY GAWSH! That was really good. I hope you make a sequel.

Hugs and Smiles,

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i love it.

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