Reviews for Unexpectations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good, I enjoyed every bit of it. A few mistakes with spacing here and there, but all around good. |
![]() ![]() there's no such word as unexpectations. i just thought i'd let you know cause it sounds blah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this story. awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such cute story, I can't help but love it! A thousand Miles is one of my all time favorite songs too so yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I felt bad for Jake though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story |
![]() ![]() this story happens too fast. |
![]() ![]() aww that was really sweet! nice story really liked it. But you might've ended it a bit abruptly? Or maybe I'm just used to reading really long stories. But a very cute lighthearted story! Liked the plot and characters! What about Jack? |
![]() ![]() ![]() E! That was marvelous! I very much enjoyed the read. :) Two thumbs up, indeed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good job. I especially like the name Elissa. It's cool. You have quite a few grammar mistakes in here, might want to consider getting a beta. It's kind of hard to understand at times. Also, the characters seem over-dramatic and unrealistic at times - like "Oh MY Gawd KEVIN I HATE YOU!" seems a bit of an over-reaction for his comment about the pants. And some how I can't picture Jack saying "Omg Kevin!" But this really does have potential. I'm a sucker for stories about tomboys, even though I'm not actually one myself. Wonder why... |
![]() ![]() ![]() A cliche i love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is really good please make a sequel to it, it's amazing. I wish/hope that you make a sequel and if you have, WOOTWOOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GAWSH! That was really good. I hope you make a sequel. Hugs and Smiles, see-the-way |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it. see-the-way |