Reviews for Sky Painter
cheeseworth chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
terrific imagery, and a great ending too. i really like the ease/easel thing too. you have a way with words.
Quill of sanguinity chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
I really think your style's getting much more ironic, much more sensitive. Nice one here!
Pimpled Boy chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
This is probably your most excellent and wonderful poem written. I especially like the last stanza. It really sums up the whole poem well. Continue to write more poems. It's a pleasure reading them. Hope to learn more about poems from you. (I'm not a good writer though!) Thanks for your reviews.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 11/8/2004
the imagery jumps out...excellent writing
Lord Jalore Mcbrige chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Great usage of imagery. The style's enchanting
reicheru chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
ohh whee! that was really good. and doesnt sound angsty *nods* you know how to change the mood. like thhe exclamation marks in the hyperactive part. you can convey so many different emotions into one poem. bravo *nods* i actually can imagine you drawing smiley faces and saying all that. hahass. wy no hop-scotching. why hop-skipping. hahass. royal blue is a very pretty colour *nods* lighting is fluorescent meh. i never knew that. well i guess now i do. hahass.
long review. BE HAPPY.
lovee reicheru.
sine chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
what should I say? beautiful imagery.
myno chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
that's gorgeous. You're style is like no one else's here on fictionpress. I love the images you form with your words and the strong sense of emotion.
The lines: flecks of gold for the
gods to play connect-the-dots and form
the constellations. -awesome image. Keep writing forever, i'll definitely keep reading your stuff. *adds to favs*
hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
I thought I'd
return the favour
the same way
it came.
Well, I did
notice this poem yesterday
but decided to review it
So be it.
I am amazed
to find myself
liking this.
I love the way you
put the words across.
An interesting piece
that you've brought out,
with the imagery.
It forces me,
ever so reluctantly
to say
"Well done!"
There was no sarcasm attached whatsoever.
arcanum-zw chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
Yes! Finally can review. The emotions conveyed here are so addictive! The happy ecstasy part is so hyperactive. Lol. I don't believe you didn't write this without any inspiration!
vanka chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
love the imagery here; how you aren't afraid to use personification. good job.
do not resuscitate chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
heavenly. the imagery is just beautiful. the colors and the moods are perfect celestial infinite.
moonarised polane chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
hey. beautiful. yeah its really,really gd and i loved it.
i knew you wrote it for me right?
im favouriting it.
the whole poem was just so rich and full of vivid colours. its so real.
i have this sudden image of a little kid saying "mommy,mommy, i wanna be a sky painter when i grow up!"
i have strange imagination.
anyway. i love this. seriously.
and yarh. i noticed the absence of caps. heh.
okkay. thats all.
Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
o beautiful! love ur imagery in this and your descriptions
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
Oh, those connecting dots
From neutron star to giant reds
From blues A-major strummed
Singing lost longings leaning
Upwards into sky
Where awaits impatient
Kismet's lightning flash
Stroke of clear electric
Slashing the cloud dwelling
With its poignant crash!
Wonderful, delightful, *many adjectives flow on* m