|Reviews for trying to escape|
| Charlottes-pen chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
Oh my gosh, that's so sad, once again you are amazing. It's so very sad, and who wouldn't like it, it is so fantastic. The rhyming scheme of this poem is different from your other poems, were you trying for that, or did it just happen? Even the stanzas are more seperate than usual. It's different, but so very awsome. The messages in your poetry are always so potent. You just amaze me. Keep it coming.