Reviews for Locked
Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
aw, that's amazing! reminds me of one of mine that i wrote-i think you conveyed my thoughts better than i did! Thanks for the review, it was much appreciated! :)
Victim of the Wraith chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
Good description of a first love. I like the idea of eternity erupting, order collapsing, lustful chaos swirling. That just sounds like bliss or a high that someone would get from being in love. Again. Great job. Good work. Keep it up...spookyagent4
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Brillant ! _

Noelle
wantedINheaven chapter 1 . 11/28/2004
That's really good! Very short but it stillc aptured emotions very correctly! Good job.
myno chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
wow... that's very, very powerful. it's going onto my favs. Beautifully written, so short and still there's so much there. Excellent job.
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
That was, so deep it is just scary...
Like, Wow.

The whole thing is just so meaningful...
goes to fav,yesh.
Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
I love how the last line capped the poem off! (this isn't a repost is it? probably just deja vu...)
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
I love this poem... especially tahty ending.. amazing job... short but awesome
decayedmatter chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
Cool. It's short, but it says it all.
SumiFritzN chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
I like this. It might not have been meant like this, although i think it probably was, but it's like you're kinda making fun of the love at first sight and stuff like that with the last line. That's one thing that nobody ever mentions. So cool! )