Reviews for Seduce Me, Knife
Almost Always chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
Great poem!
Raven-Haired Rapunzel chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
I know that feeling... well written...
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
Sublime! (Of course, I could be biased because I like dark beauty.)
But psychologically, there is a huge difference between chronic cutting (like what I'm prone to), and slashing one's wrist with the intention dying. This poem seems to describe the latter. You should use another term besides "cutting" in your summary.
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
-music in the background- You can make a song out of this...but to the poem: Excellent as always.
Daniel Summers chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
I've never seen that particular imagery used before. It is very interesting.
I'm not sure I like the use of the word "tiredly". I think it may detract from the otherwise consistent tone of the poem. But that is just a personal reaction.
"Metal kissing soft skin" -
That's just genius. I love that line.
Midnyght Angel chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
Powerful, I can totally feel the sadness and longing. Great job.