Reviews for Lifeline chapter 1 . 11/7/2004
Ooh! This looks really cool! I think you should continue this one, I think it would be a great story if you played it out right.
Nice17hat chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
I liked it, but of course you knew that because I already told you.
It's a good basis for a story, you just have to figure out someway that you can build off of the prologue to make a story, and with what you put in the porlogue it's pretty open ended (to an extent anyway), so it isn't like you have to follow it in your first chapter, you could build up to it.
Well, that's my two (three actually...) cents on it. Keep on writing, I love all of your stuff.