Reviews for Last Kiss
hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
oh wow! you've touched on all the emotional bases really well. it's so sad, and wonderful! excellent writing. -winter
Deathsythe chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
I am SO holding back tears right now. That was one of the saddest poems I've ever read. I loved it but it was so so soo so sad! Did your love really die? Commit suicide? I can't imagine how that must have felt if it were true...
I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing for a while, it's just that you always update so much, it got too much for me to handle. I miss a week of the net and I see 30 poems from you and would never have the time to catch up on them all.
You're going to be something great, I'm almost certain you'll become a famous poet. Someone with the passion and zeal that you have, to be able to crank out so many poems that show your feelings. And it's even better if these poems aren't reflections of reality, because if so, then you truly have a gift from God. An ability to make others empathise with your poems even if you yourself don't feel said emotions.
Keep up the good work. This is definately going on my favorites list.
Ja ne
D-sythe
"You think so too, right?"
AmaranthineMisery chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
that was so sad and yet so beautiful