WHYYYYY

awwww rafe is in loooooove

OMG Too cute Rafe ;)

LOVE THE KISS

You typed "He stood at the window of his London townhouse contemplated" It should be "and contemplated"

A good beginning. This story seems interesting.

r they french or english, or something else?

just read "betrothal" and i liked it, a lot! i'd love to see you continue it.

AHH! trust me to find this story when it has been discontinued :(

i love it! such an awesome plotline and the falcon... whoo child.. ;)

i hope it was as awesome for you to write as it was awesome for me to read, i really enjoyed it! hope you continue it soon but until then i guess we'll all be coming up with up own theories of what happens to rafe and mina :)

xx

Hey I really enjoy your story. But a little note, during the Regency Era there was no Soviet Union. The communist revolutions did not occur until 1917 and even then a definitive communist state did not really appear until the 1920's. Other than that I do enjoy the story!

love it

god she is such a bitch but i absolutely love her character.

i hope you'll be able to continue soon! I've loved it so far! Can't wait to know what happened next!

An amazing story!

I hope that you will revive and update this soon!

Till then...

oh yesh.. i feel for mina and rafe! fallen in love with your two lead characters.. c'mon pls write up more mina-rafe moments! can't wait for them to reconcil and catfight again~! and loki by my guess would be our rafe's best fren worchester isn't it? hehe.. but i would never find out if you dun write! but no stress! take your time to write while i, an ever faithful fan will wait patiently for a new chap~

if it's discontinued, why have you marked it as incomplete?