Reviews for The Vampire's Werewolf
SkyRunnerSparrow chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
ok... where to begin... umm... I'll start off with the constructive criticism... I'm confused... They were in a car on a mountain road, then all of a sudden they're at some building? I don't get it...

That's the only criticism I have :)!

I loved the concept of your story! it was very interesting... I never would have thought of that topic, but I like it! I like the main character's name too...

so... anyway... GOOD JOB!
Bella-lynn chapter 3 . 10/12/2008
good story and i know u already know but the first chapter should probaby be revised thats the only problem i see... otherwise all is well cant wait till the next one comes out tho Callie seems like a very interesting character and Killer seem... *cough cough* hot lol
Amarantis chapter 3 . 9/20/2008
Interesting. :) I'll stick around hoping for more chapters.
Zebbie chapter 3 . 2/20/2008
This is good! Are you ever going to update it?
Emaryllis chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
Very nice, I would really love to know what happens next. The only thing is, I thought they were trapped in the mud? How come they were suddenly at home? Other than that, wonderful job so far! )
toxic-noodle725 chapter 3 . 1/14/2007
hay continue this. its really interesting
lolomgwriter chapter 3 . 12/22/2005
haha insane story. very interesting. I look forward to the next chapter although I do notice the last update was 11 months ago(01-17-05)
sarabeth120 chapter 3 . 9/17/2005
This is really good, I like it alot so far. I hope you update soon!
xXXx chapter 3 . 1/17/2005
wowie! another great chapter. i can't wait to see what happens between killer and callie (god, he sounds hot!). update soon!
MoonlightSilverMadz chapter 3 . 1/17/2005
Oh, okay, now I understand what's going on. Great chapter; I'm very interested in seeing what happens between Callie and Killer. Madi
Rusalka chapter 3 . 1/17/2005
Well written so far. I've enjoyed reading it. Just wandering though, how is it a blood bond? does that mean she drank from him? And if she did, would that make her part vampire? I like Callie, she seems like a very interesting character.
MoonlightSilverMadz chapter 2 . 1/11/2005
Oh cool! Los Angelos! This should get very interesting. I like your story very much, but one critique; I couldn't really tell where they where, and at the very beginning of the chapter, when Callie was by the car, I got confused. But anway, great story! Madi
xXXx chapter 2 . 1/11/2005
Ooh, great chappie! Great story, actually. It seems to have a different tone than the ones you usually write. I love it! You better update soon!
Ethereal Kisses chapter 2 . 1/10/2005
You story just gets better and better...thanks, I think this chapter did explain a lot of things. I like the way you ease background details into the story, it's very natural and I think it gives the story a real mysterious quality. Anyway, it was awesome!
Ethereal Kisses chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
Thisis really really good! You sure can write! However, one thing is bothering me: what happened to them and how did they get out of the situation? Anyway, please update soon!
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