Reviews for My Sky is Bluer
Eirien chapter 1 . 12/12/2004
Beautiful, I love nature poetry, especially when it can br read metaphorically as well. I love the paradox in the first two lines, it can also apply to life situations, that one is stronger when confronting difficulties. The repetitions of "blue" thorughout the poem enhance the intensity of that colour in your poem. Great piece.
twilightwriter07 chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Interesting poem...I loved the second stanza. There's a calming effect when looking at skies. I enjoyed reading this.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
i like this a lot. love the color blue as well. coolness!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
your evening sky is blue and my sunrise seems blue...I like the first two lines here, makes you think