Reviews for Take and Break
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
I like this, I can definitely relate.
kit feral chapter 1 . 5/3/2005
"My bones bled, Till you tasted my blood, Spat it back out, Wasn't good enough" was just amazing. And the line "Inch of my ness" really stood out for some reason. The last bit just blew me away. Really amazing and powerful stuff here. Great work, keep it up!
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Talk about intense. but in a good way. Very powerful and moving.
Little Rebel Angel chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
Awsome. Nice peom i liked the way you ended it. Sometimes it didn't make much scence but i don't alot of the time so i shouldn't talk. great poem keep writeing
Summerkins chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
Wow...very moving and somewhat frightening poem. I hope whomever this poem is about breaks away from this 'friend'.