Reviews for Revisions
Arkash chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Great story is very enticing with its mixture of fairy tale and the reality of a drunk Job!
Casey Drake chapter 9 . 3/1/2005
i see. why is this called "revisions"? anyway, interesting story.

:) CD
Kusco1 chapter 4 . 12/1/2004
Very intersting. I like the tale of Queen Linda and the act of having to purify the blood. I'm going to be very intersted in seeing how this plays out. Keep up the good work.
mizu no kokoro chapter 2 . 11/26/2004
poor Joan, i reli feel sorry for her, and her brother
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
AWesome start, i likes the whole idea of fairy tales contrasting with realitykeep working on this!
Lost Inside chapter 7 . 11/26/2004
Poor Charles! :( I feel bad for him! Joan too!

Lost Inside
Teperehmi chapter 9 . 11/15/2004
That was really good! It really made me think. Keep writing. Nice work!
Electrana chapter 9 . 11/9/2004
This story is brilliant. It really got me thinking about things and what if things we thought weren't real were.