Reviews for Hole in My Chest
Sheets chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
This poem is amazing. The underlying sinister message is well received.
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
sad, but that's how it is. great metaphor by the way!
lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 1/17/2005
very well thought out. and a unique metaphor. also-My mind floating away; free-nice addition..yeah when a bunch of crap is going into you, ya just cant even think anymore. really a great depiction of all these feelings. keep writing!
frugale chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
It's strange how this poem can also be read backwards. I loved the simple prose in surface, but how complex the problematic really is. Keep it up.
Hermoics chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
Aww... It's sad yet true. I wish someone would put my finger back together. I slit it open today and it hurts. Sry off subject. About your review, cool about you being inspired by the movie that reminds me of the poem. See we think alike. Did you get my e mail? Hope so. Write back. Aneways Love Hermoics
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
Sweet. I like the idea of the broken doll. Very creative. Good job, keep writing!
Much Love,
zt chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
Oh cool. I've got a thing for 'doll' poems and this one is no disappointment
Awesome. It sounds like a song.