Reviews for Fall Together
gwennybear chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
If it's okay to say...hmm...it's like Romeo and Juliet? Well...when Romeo thought Juliet was dead and he killed himself and Juliet woke up and found him dead and killed herself...you know? But it's really nice and sad...again, great poem!
Laura Ellis chapter 1 . 12/24/2004
Tear-jerker if I do say so myself.
Cry-of-death chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
Brilliant i loved how you ended it..come to think you end all your poems brilliantly! i cannot compare to your work great
gothicrebal chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
yes ima read most of ur stories. i like this 1 to ive been there...er not gonna go there...but great poem.
doowopbop chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
That was an amazing poem. I really liked all the emotion in there. I mean, she found love right before she died...
that is awesome.
not the fact that she died before she could truley experience it, but, well, you know what i mean. At least i hope so.
Terrific job.
~*Veronique*~
GothicSpook chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
Aw thats so sad! I love it! The rhyming was excelent and had a really great flow. Well done!